Seeing you smile makes my heart ache
Seeing your laughter makes me have a stomachache
Because of your enchanting actions that makes me cringe
That makes it hard for me to weave our tale of heartbreak
(Bridge)
So why don't you understand
We're just not meant for each other
So why don't we be kinder
And free our tormented hearts?
(Chorus)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH......
It really hurts in my heart!~
To see your heart shattered with blood
But baby sorry that's the truth
That I can never be with you
So goodbye my lover.......(cries)
Maybe I should avoid laying my eyes on you
If I had knew we had such sufferings to go through
I could had just walked off despite our love grew
Because...I knew our fairytale wasn't meant to be true
(Last bridge)
It really pains my heart to say goodbye
Especially when I had to tell a cruel lie
And I would rather numb my aching feelings
Than let you feel broken inside
I know it's true
That I'll never be with you
So farewell my angel
And I will let you fly......
2006-12-13 02:38:56 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I'm only 12 and I know she's just not the girl for me so I wanna write her the farewell song as a show of my sincerity...please give some comments thanks!
2006-12-13 02:39:50 · update #1
12 years old writing like this. You don't need her, you will be famous some day my friend trust me.
2006-12-13 02:42:26 · answer #1 · answered by iroc 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Only someone who loved you could get all the way through that.
I don't so I didn't.
The Breakup Song
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(A capella)
I saw you by your locker
And wanted just to die
I stared down at my Nikes
Couldn't look you in the eye
(slow, soft, almost bluesy guitar)
We're not together anymore
I'm sad and I'm afraid
I've got no idea how
I'll get through seventh grade
(soft playing of flutes)
I had so much more to say my dea
And now we're at an end
But I'm dying to ask you
Who is your hot friend?
[Abrupt stop of all instruments as the final word fades. A black-clad young woman steps forward and softly, mournfully plays the triangle]
[Twelve white doves are released, to represent your claimed age. One poops on your head for writing your song. The other eleven nail me for writing this one.]
END
2006-12-13 02:41:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You're only 12 ?!?! Wow. I like those lyrics, I could almost hear it in my mind as a good Alternative Rock song. You'd better get a copyright on that!
2006-12-13 02:46:15 · answer #3 · answered by I Might Even Be a Rock Star... 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Still needs work.....the heart shattered with blood part is gory and other parts of the song don't really make sense.....you have a start, but still keep working on it.
2006-12-13 02:42:35 · answer #4 · answered by Christabelle 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
god... it's pretty sweet of u to do this... the lyrics are fantastic though.. can't imagine u r only 12!!
But i don't know how it'll go down with her u know.. cos if it was me, i wouldn't be able to stomach it.. a sweet n romantic guy like u breaking it off with me, i will be thinking? Btw, i am 25!
GREAT LYRICS! 10/10!!
2006-12-13 02:47:05 · answer #5 · answered by SyaKiRa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are only 12 that is a mazing the words the way youe express yourself you are definatatley an amazing person with a lot of selfassurence it is beautiful and if you don't like her sing that to her hopefully she will understand.
2006-12-13 02:43:38 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty awesome for 12! I think if you keep at it, some day we'll all hear your songs on the radio.
2006-12-13 02:46:08 · answer #7 · answered by mikah_smiles 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it was beautiful my friend...and trust me one day you'll look back on this song and laugh because it will mean nothing to you then except a fond childhood memory
2006-12-13 02:49:11 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty heavy lyrics for a 12 year old. not bad not bad at all. uh look I dont mean to pry but are you at school right now?
2006-12-13 02:43:57 · answer #9 · answered by molly 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics suck.... BUT... there are a lot of popular songs out there with crap lyrics and a good beat or nice tune...
2006-12-13 02:57:22 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋