aboy named Noah whan'ts to join the seals but one day at his bording school he has a were dream. relly he go back in time for a short trip into the world of dragons. just flying around inwisable he calides with a hard object and it merdes with him! then he shoots up out of bed like in a nightmerr. he gose on with his life untill he discovers that he can transforme in a dragon for a short time. he keeps this a secret and latter joins the SEALS. He goes throu tree mixxons a recon on terriestist supplys and can't be spotted and it quickly come aperent that he will have to break his secret to hes most trusted SEAL team member (I need some names) he will use some of his powers as well as the seal tactics to escape. in the next mission he has to distroy the supply lines ( need help with more info on that). and the thurd mission he get into the main assault and when clearing the fortruss the leader come behind and kills 4 of his 6 team members before gettin insenerated!
I need help
2006-12-12 22:57:32 · 7 answers · asked by DRAGON 5 in Politics & Government ➔ Military
Spell check is located to the upper right dude...oh by the way interesting story...what is it?
2006-12-12 23:01:18 · answer #1 · answered by Diadem 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting.
First: You need to work on your spelling b/c there's nothing that turns a reader off more than incoherancy. It just totally ruins the credibility of the narrative voice.
Second: Since you are writing about the Navy Seals...you need to do research on them, their training, their lifestyle and their tactics. You should read up in general on warfare strategies, and how supply lines work.
As for names: One way is to peruse your favorite books and borrow the names of your favorite character and then spell it backwards (then use it only if it sounds good). :}
Btw, what happens when he transforms into a dragon: does he lose his clothes, and when he morphs back into human form, he has to find a way to recover his clothing? (Thats a common problem Shapechanging character in fantasy books have to deal with). Maybe his trusted Seal team member will always have to carry extra clothing with him....hah.
Good luck.
2006-12-12 23:18:32 · answer #2 · answered by CloudRider9 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i replaced into gonna say David Gemmell... *cry* Oh properly, the 'Drenai' books i individually discovered to be the ideal for the conflict/delusion. Legend, King on the Gate, Druss the Legend etc. thoughts of real hardcore honor the place heroes drink wine with their enemies on the eve of their defeat in honor of a fallen hero, and responsibilities to people and u . s .. some delusion factors... very little or no even with the undeniable fact that. It occurs in a fititious international around the circumstances of Vikings and stuff. Or the Riftwar saga series by employing Raymond. E. Feist is a little extra delusion-ish. The mortal realm is attempting to overcome lower back a fey invasion or some thing to the like. i haven't study them in a protracted time. as quickly as lower back, crammed with honor and duty... yet my %. may be the David Gemmell books. iciness Warriors is my well-known; approximately 3 previous heros; an archer, a swordsman (i think of) and a seer who conform to one final challenge to guard a princess approximately to furnish start.
2016-12-30 08:30:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's a war on terriers? Do I need to turn myself in for harboring a West Highland White Terrier?
2006-12-12 23:15:36 · answer #4 · answered by Judge Dredd 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow I know what you do or did when they taught spelling in school. Which nintendo game did you get that from or is it from a bunch of them? Not very original but at least you are thinking,,,I think
2006-12-12 23:06:43 · answer #5 · answered by crusinthru 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When did we declare war on dogs? I am confused.
2006-12-12 23:03:50 · answer #6 · answered by pedohunter1488 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes you do !!!!your spelling is atrocious can't make any sense out of your writing
2006-12-12 23:02:37 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋