But I can't figure out how to start it out. Once I get it started out, its easy for me... Can you help me come up with a beginning? Here are some things about her: She has blue eyes, black hair, beautiful smile and she can be pretty funny, and can cheer me up whenever
2006-12-12 12:04:15 · 7 answers · asked by Zach S 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
There's nobody as sweet as you
and then find things to rhyme with "you" like "too" and "two" and "blue" for her eyes.
2006-12-12 12:08:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are the light in my infinte abyss
You are the warmth in my year long winter
You are the only sunshine in my eternal rain
this worked for me, but you do the rest
2006-12-12 20:15:42 · answer #2 · answered by Sir 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
please do not be corny! use alot of imagery in ur poem but do not say roses are red violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are you, to start that is so completely cheesy she would fall over laughing and secondly violets are not blue they are purple! i would start it out "your smile is like a thousand doves..........."
2006-12-12 20:11:43 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I close my eyes and see your smiles
And your eyes, oh so blue
Just for you I would go miles
Baby, I love you!
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It's really sweet what you're doing!
2006-12-12 20:08:50 · answer #4 · answered by X_Mint_X 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Eyes like the bluest sea
______ ______ _____ felicity
2006-12-12 20:10:28 · answer #5 · answered by rache001 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There's been some fine times...........
2006-12-12 20:06:47 · answer #6 · answered by klechak 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love you
2006-12-12 20:05:56 · answer #7 · answered by DanceForJoy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋