In the bottom of the sea, and amid the stunningly colored coral reefs, there lived the fish and the other sea creatures happily together.
2006-12-12 08:00:29 · 9 answers · asked by Sea Mist 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Thanks to you all so far...and yes it's a "fairy tale"
2006-12-12 08:39:03 · update #1
It is correct, only I would say: AT the bottom instead of IN!
Instead of , there lived ... I would say: amid ... coral reefs the fish and the other sea creatures lived happily together.
It sounds refreshingly uncommon and a bit antiquated, like in a fairy tale. Lovely!!!
I wonder how your text goes on!!!
2006-12-12 08:24:43 · answer #1 · answered by saehli 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
At the bottom of the sea, amid the stunningly colored coral reefs, fish and other sea creatures lived happily together. That's how I would say it.
2006-12-12 16:02:59 · answer #2 · answered by Jennifer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Could read:
At the bottom of the sea amid the stunningly colored coral reefs, the fish and other sea creatures lived together happily .
or you could also substitute amidst for amid.
2006-12-12 16:05:00 · answer #3 · answered by wvucountryroads 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you're talking backwards. Are you working with George Lucas on something for Yoda?
2006-12-12 16:03:30 · answer #4 · answered by vanamont7 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds a little strange but it is not incorrect.
2006-12-12 16:02:23 · answer #5 · answered by Love Shepherd 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quite a long run-on sentence, but it makes sense to me. =)
2006-12-12 16:52:17 · answer #6 · answered by Devin O 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
SO, IT'S POSSIBLE, ALSO THERE IS A FOOD CHAIN SO SMALLER ONES GO SO THE BIGGER ONES CAN LIVE.
2006-12-12 16:02:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
maybe some changes you need to make
2006-12-12 16:08:57 · answer #8 · answered by Pinkigal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is correct, but it sounds weird
2006-12-12 16:14:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋