I love the way when we first met, you thought me cute not sad & wet
I love that now we share our lives we ***** and bicker like old fish wives
Even when there someone there, they all see though it and know we care,
I love the way you brush your hair even though there's not much there
I love the way you scratch my back and sing out of tune to your faveorite track
I love your shaved and cuddly belly on which I lay to watch the telle, we snuggle down so nice and cosy till I ask you to rub my toseys!
I love it that you hold my hand, the way you cuddle, look and stand
Every time that we're appart, I feel the aching in my heart
I cherish every day together just in case, -- never say never!
You know I have no plans to leave you, all I wish is to please you
We may not be the perfect two but you've got me and I love you !
2006-12-12 02:00:14 · 23 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
the blank word is b i t c h !
yes it is for my boyfriend and yes I wrote it myself!
I have taken out the bit about leaving as i don't wish to instill any fears!
2006-12-12 02:08:01 · update #1
Feel free to copy !
2006-12-12 02:24:06 · update #2
That's very cute and personal... I love the way you've picked out his imperfections and note used them as insulting in any way but more as a means of saying you love him more because of them.
It's beautiful... and yup, I'd leave out the line: "You know I have no plans to leave you, all I wish is to please you" just in case!
2006-12-12 02:26:48 · answer #1 · answered by Johnny! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol. have you showed it to your partner, i am sure they will just love it. well done you for taking the initiative to create this poem to the one you love and Cherish. The world would be a happier place if there were more like you, hun. cheers to you both.
2006-12-12 02:09:51 · answer #2 · answered by Hunny Bun... 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She shaves her belly?
But I'm sure she'll love it.
Oh, I see - it's for a chap. Even so - does he really shave his belly?
2006-12-12 02:08:49 · answer #3 · answered by Hello Dave 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a country song...lol...
2006-12-12 02:04:05 · answer #4 · answered by serenity113001 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice your partner will like it mainly knowing that is coming from the heart
2006-12-12 02:05:25 · answer #5 · answered by starlight♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cute.
Did you write that yourself?
You must have an amazing talent.
2006-12-12 02:04:24 · answer #6 · answered by bluenose 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautifully detailed and thougthful. Well done, he's very lucky.
2006-12-12 02:03:39 · answer #7 · answered by Joseph Manners 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
great- but since you posted it someone will probably steal it and say they wrote it and get credit for it
2006-12-12 02:05:37 · answer #8 · answered by cranky_gut 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhh i think its cute,although a tad strange in places!!I think she will love it!!! x
2006-12-12 02:04:57 · answer #9 · answered by jo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes its lovely poem but please dont put some swear words in it! i prefer poems without bad langauge in it. Fantastic poem!
2006-12-12 02:29:21 · answer #10 · answered by cheekyhoney2000 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋