HELP : Can someone correct this flyer? I need English lessons.?

Question

Here is following a flyer i'll pin on a wall at the university, but since I don't speak english, it sure needs to be corrected and turned into good english :

"Any american native speaker needed.
I’m a 24 yo french girl who wants to improve her english. My level is correct, but not fluent. I need conversation lessons with possibly a student (male of female).
10 euros p. Hour or 15 euros for two hours. Conversation exchanges possible.
Please phone me at : XX XX XX XX XX and ask for Marielle."

Could you change it into sthg better?

THANK YOU!

Answer 1

Well to start out with, your beginning sentance makes it wound like your looking for a Native American (Indian) :)

Do you speak American English?
24 yo French girl wants to improve her conversational American English. Need someone who is fluent, prefer someone whos 1st Language is American English.
10 Euros p. hour or 15 Euros for 2 hours. Willing to trade for French lessons.
Please phone me at: XX XX XX XX ask for Marielle.

Answer 2

Needed: Native English Speaker

I am a 24 year old French girl who is looking to improve conversational skills in American English. I am proficient, but not yet fluent. Compensation includes either a language exchange or 10 euros p. hour or 15 euros for two. Please phone Marielle at xxxxxxxxx

By the way, with your compensation prices, there will be no money incentive for anyone to talk more than 1 hour at a time with you, because the way you have it set up, they will make more money if they do two one hour sessions. I would try to just do a regular free exchange though, I'm sure there's someone out there who would love to practice their French!

Answer 3

Try:

"I need someone to help me with my Conversational English.

I’m a 24 yr old French girl who wants to improve her English. Whilst I know the language, I am not fluent. I need conversation lessons with possibly a student (male or female).

Willing to pay 10 euros per hour or 15 euros for two hours. Conversely, I would be Just as happy to teach you French.

Please call me at: XX XX XX XX XX and ask for Marielle."

Answer 4

Native French speaker with adequate English lessons wishes to improve English skills and is seeking conversation/lessons with native English speakers or students. Willing to compensate up to 10 Euros per hour, 15 Euros for two hours. If interested in helping, Please phone Marielle at: xx xx xx xx xx.

How's that, Marielle?

Good luck to you - I wish I knew how to speak French!

Answer 5

It is very good! But maybe:

"I'm a 24 year old French girl and would like to improve my spoken English. Although my English is good, I am not yet fluent. I would like to have conversation lessons with preferably another student (male or female). A conversation exchange is also possible if you would like to improve your French.
10 Euros per hour / 15 Euros for 2 hours.
Please call XXXXXXX and ask for Marielle."

Good luck, your English is much better than my French ;)

Answer 6

English Tutor Needed
I'm a 24 year-old French female who wants to improve her English. I able to speak, but not fluent. I would like to have conversations with male or female students and I am willing to pay 10 Euros/Hour or 15 Euros/2 Hours. Please phone me at XX XX XX XX XX and ask fo Marielle.

Thank You!

Answer 7

American native speaker needed to assist 24 year old French woman fine tune her English.
10 Euros per hour or 15 Euros for two hours.
Would be willing to teach you French in exchange for English.
Call me today at : XX XX XX XX XX.

Merci beau coup!

Answer 8

Wanted: native born English speaker to improve student's conversational skills. Will pay 10 euros for one hour lesson or 15 euros for two hour lesson. Conversation exchange instead of payment is possible Phone me at xxxxx and ask for Marielle.


other things are unnecessary and will only get you guys who want to meet you.
good luck

Answer 9

Alors, Marielle,

"Beautiful, young [24 y.o] French Lady needs a native American [male or female] Speaker to improve her Communication Skills with. Can pay 10Eu. for one hour to 15 Eu. for two. I'll be happy to help you with French and we can make a swap, too! Call xxxxxxxxxx Marielle!"

You'll have a lot of young American guys pounding on your doors!

Bonne Chance!

Joyeux Noel!!!!!

Answer 10

Wanted..Tutor for English speaking
24 year old with some English, but not fluent. I would like to learn conversation. Male or female okay.
Will pay 10euros p.hour,15 for 2 hours.
Please phone me at XXXXXXXXXXXX ask for Marielle.
Thank you