ok sooo i am writing this poem for my boyfriend for christmas and i need to know what to add or if this is a good start..im not done...
Our first christmas together and what a feeling I recieve
To share these moment with you, its a feeling i cant believe
I match up a reason with each snowflake that comes down
A reason of why i love you, to realize what i have found
Finding you is the best gift i could ever obtain
And what is great is I know you feel the same
To love and be loved, wow what an award
Im so blessed to know i will never get bored
My wish to you on this christmas day
Is for you to be happy in each and every way
I want to give you everything i can
I want to always be with you holding your hand....
2006-12-10 11:26:04 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
You really don't want someone else's opinion on a poem with so much intamicy, you would probably want to keep your essence running through it, but here are a few suggestion, you can choose to use or not:
Our first Christmas together, a special day it is indeed
Moments as special as this I never would've concieved
You are like no other, my special snowflake, from heaven you came down
Some many reasons why I love you, I cherish what I've found
Having you on Christmas Day is as sweet as candy canes
You satisfy my sweet tooth, I hope I do the same
To love and be loved by the one whom I adore
I know I'm blessed to have you I couldn't ask for more
My wish for you on Christmans Day is for happiness in every way
I want to always hold your hand I promise to give us all I can
Merry Christmas my love and heart
Today we'll join and never part
Just a suggestion, I tried to keep your words in there. Not sure how old you are so I didn't want to put anything in there like "come and unwrap your gift"
Hope he likes whatever you decided to go with
2006-12-10 11:57:13 · answer #1 · answered by tamoi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! Very cute! I can tell you have some talent in these poems! He'll love it!
2006-12-10 19:30:10 · answer #2 · answered by Doodles14 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep going.
2006-12-10 19:28:23 · answer #3 · answered by S K 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are doing great it sounds very sweet
2006-12-10 19:30:40 · answer #4 · answered by crazy_sunshine2 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋