I've been trying to find a children's book about step-parent adoption and been unsuccessful. I made a slideshow for my daughter telling her adoption story and was wondering if I could get some feedback on it- is it how you would word it? Anything I should change? The link is below.
http://media.putfile.com/Merediths-Adoption-Story
Thanks!
2006-12-10 09:01:10 · 5 answers · asked by Jennifer F 6 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Parenting
To tell you the truth, I saw the beginning and didn't want to watch the rest! I just wanted to keep looking at that cute little face at the beginning! I think you did a good job on it. But, on the slide where it said "You were a family" I think you should change it to "We were a family". Other than that it was really good :-)
2006-12-10 09:12:46 · answer #1 · answered by CelebrateMeHome 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I haven't checked out the slidshow yet but I just saw a book at target last night that was about step perent adoption! Maybe give them a call to see if it's in stock by you.
2006-12-10 18:07:38 · answer #2 · answered by Ryan's Ma 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with the first answer as far as the wording. Other than that it made me want to cry. What a beautiful family you have. Congrats!!
2006-12-10 17:23:47 · answer #3 · answered by Mrs. Always Right 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was VERY touching you done a GREAT job! The world needs more fathers like him! " anyone can be a father yet it takes one HECK OF A Guy to be a DAD!
2006-12-10 18:18:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
omg........ thats so touching.......wow....i think its perfect!
2006-12-10 17:15:59 · answer #5 · answered by GROOVY LILY 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋