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> YOU SAW ME AS A FRIEND ... I SAW YOU AS SO MUCH MORE .... YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU LIKED HER... SO I GOT YOU TWO TOGETHER.....YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU WERE HAPPY AND YOU THANKED ME TWO MONTHS LATER ......I SAT NEXT TO YOU FEELING SO SAD ON THE INSIDE BUT HAPPY FOR YOU ON THE OUTSIDE.....YOU ASKED ME WHAT YOU SHOULD GET HER FOR HER BIRTHDAY AND I TOLD YOU EXACTLY WHAT TO GET........YOU TOLD ME THAT YOU LOVED HER...........I LOOKED INTO YOUR EYES AND START TO GET TEARY....YOU ASK ME WHY IM CRYING AND I TELL YOU THAT THEY ARE TEARS OF JOY AND THAT YOU SHOULD TELL HER THAT YOU LOVE HER......NOW IM SITTING HERE ALL DRESSED UP WATCHING THE MAN I LOVE ABOUT TO SAY "I DO" AND THEN I FEEL MY HEART STOP AND EVERYTHING TURNS INTO A BLUR.........I HERE YOU ASK THE DOCTOR IF IM GOING TO BE OK....THE DOCTOR SAYS..." IM AFRAID NOT .......THIS WOMAN IS SUFFURING FROM A BROKEN HEART THAT CANNOT BE HEALED " ......YOU LOOK AT ME .......I OPEN MY EYES AND THEN LOOK AT YOU AND SAY ......." I HOPE YOU AND HER HAVE A WONDERFUL LIFE TOGETHER...AND ONE MORE THING... I LOVE YOU ... I ALWAYS HAVE BUT WAS TOO AFRAID TO SAY IT..." I SAY IT ONE MORE TIME " I LOVE YOU " ...THEN I HAVE A FLASHBACK OF THE FIRST TIME I MET YOU ......I SMILE WITH A TEAR GOING DOWN MY CHEEK ...............AND I .........die..........................

2006-12-09 12:18:11 · 13 answers · asked by BrOwN eYe'D cHiCa 2 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

13 answers

Umm...melodramatic. I wouldn't suggest giving it to a guy you loved, because he'd probably think you were a little...off.

And the CAPS have got to go.

But otherwise...good.

2006-12-09 12:21:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Yup that's pretty sad. A real cry for help. But you have to grow up and realize that there is more to life than just him. Trust me , you will find someone else and eventually go on with your life. Go have a "forget about him" party with some of your friends, they will help in times like these. We've all been there done that and got over them.

2006-12-09 13:02:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

This was really deep I was just hoping that the person would have told him how she felt a little early

2006-12-09 12:27:17 · answer #3 · answered by katie 4 · 0 0

wow....such words written in perfect tones is absolute.......you really are one of a kind.....but can i ask you something?
how did you feel when writing this.....did you felt sad or what....cause this sounds like a sad story from the start......i believe you can write out your feelings and yours was beautiful.....nice.

2006-12-09 13:04:33 · answer #4 · answered by miss kiss 2 · 0 0

i read it pretty sad...thankfully people typically speak up. and thankfully you cant die froma broken heart on the outside unless its suicide.

2006-12-09 12:21:25 · answer #5 · answered by Uriah 2 · 0 0

Tragic and beautiful.

2006-12-09 12:21:46 · answer #6 · answered by Kreutznaer 1 · 0 0

damn..thats sweet. except for the dying part

2006-12-09 12:22:00 · answer #7 · answered by Nicole M 1 · 0 0

wow. that is deep. you did a very nice job with this.

2006-12-09 12:21:15 · answer #8 · answered by Jax 4 · 0 0

SO....TOUCHING.
DID U RITE IT OR SOMETHING???
IT'S SO SAD AND UNIQUE IN ALL WAYS.

2006-12-09 12:38:26 · answer #9 · answered by marlenee 2 · 0 0

that was pretty deep!! sad though

2006-12-09 12:21:05 · answer #10 · answered by me mo 2 · 0 0

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