hi... was wondering if any body can write me poems for my daughters ?? ... just few lines for each hoping it will include& rhyme their names ... wish i could write but English is not my first language ... really appreciate ur efforts in making these 2 angels happy.. their names are: KADE (10 yrs. Quiet, sweet, intelligent, cute, sensitive ,loving& responsible) ... and MASAR ( 3 yrs. naughty, incredibly smart, cute, neat and full of love)
2006-12-09 08:16:31 · 3 answers · asked by k k 72 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
thanx guys for ur efforts .... (s), ur the best so far ... i love what u wrote dear ... and KADE loves it even more ... she started copying it in her ((special note book)).. really appreciate it , if u can write for my little one "Masar" , u will get ur 10 points.i wish i can give u more ... thanx a million ...
2006-12-10 00:28:50 · update #1
Ten years ago on a very special day
God was so happy thinking hooray
What a lovely angel I shall create today
Quietly she may
bring my peace along her way
And sensitively share
my tender loving care
responsibly with all whom she shall meet
And she will be so sweet,
and also, when I'm done,
her intelligence will be admired by everyone.
So God sat down in the shade
and did his very best.
Then looked at what he had made,
and said "May you be blessed,
cute amazing Kade!"
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Thank you for your kind appreciation... I'm very happy that Kade likes her poem. I hope that you will like Masar's poem too...Here it is:
My darling Masar,
How neat and sweet and beautiful you are!
How incredibly smart!
What a big big big big heart,
So full of love and life, my little one,
That you shine brighter than the sun,
And amaze everyone,
Most of all me.
You are three,
But somehow so tall,
That reaching the stars is no problem at all,
As if you knew,
The world was made for you.
And you make it new,
And while you do,
You make me so happy too,
To think what a precious gift you are,
My cute and wonderful Masar!
2006-12-09 12:28:19 · answer #1 · answered by s 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
LOL. Hmmm...
you pretty much did it yourself:
Kade, you are so quiet, sweet, intelligent and cute
But you're also sensitive, loving and responsible too
Masar, you are a little naughty one
you are incredibly smart, cute, brilliant, unique and loving times a ton
2006-12-09 16:24:10 · answer #2 · answered by snowfreeze3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can you write poetry? by Uncle Wayne 1-31-06
How can you write poetry?
unless,
You have cried, and laughed, and lost;
And, wandered among the thorns and roses.
Fret not,
Dread not.
But, empathize with all.
For, until you have cried, laughed, and wondered;
You know not the "all".
...................
Hello JJ
2006-12-09 16:31:45 · answer #3 · answered by MrsOcultyThomas 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋