Hello, I am thirteen years old and my classmates called me little red riding hood. I have black hair and brown eyes; I am very thin but not very tall. My favorite kind of food is seafood and spaghetti. I love to watch movies; I love movies so much that I can go to the movies by myself. My interests are reading books, swimming, writing, playing badminton, playing baseball and gossiping. You can see that I LOVE sport. My favorite book is A series of unfortunate events, I think the writer sometimes write my feelings. I am angry all the time because I think there is no justice in the world, all the evil guys win and all the good guy lose, but don't worry, I know god would know which is a better person. The only thing you have to do is wait, if you are a good person, you won't lose. If you are a bad person, don't think that you had win, time is just not up yet. By the way, if you want to chat with me, this is my e-mail address ---- llizzzie@yahoo.com.tw Welcome to chat with
2006-12-08 22:44:27 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Did I make any grammar mistakes?
2006-12-08 22:45:00 · update #1
Of course, YES, you've really made some grammatical mistakes and several other technical errors as well. But time will only permit me to mention just 3 of them:
1. I think the writer sometimes write.... that's tautology. You can change that to "I think the author sometimes write..."
2. My interests are.... Please change that to "My areas of interests are...."
3. ...don't think that you had win... Change it to "...don't think that you had won...
Contact me through my profile right now if you're serious about the chat. cya.
2006-12-08 23:10:50 · answer #1 · answered by mykemejeje 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
In N Z you probable have some expressions which at the instant are not heard someplace else, not even in Australia. i'm southern English, yet grow to be in oz..for 3 years in the early Seventies. Visited N Z around Auckland for some hours on the way homestead from oz..via sea. yet then, what's "English" English or British English? so a techniques as i'm worried the North (of england) is yet another united states for language!
2016-12-13 05:39:03 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha, cute!
Left out a comma after 13 years old. Left out a comman after thin. It's sports instead of sport. Book titles are underlined and capitalized. It's writes, not write. The sentence that starts out I am angry is a run on- make it two sentences. "you had win" is not right.
2006-12-08 22:51:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ok. People make mistakes. Yours are not so obvious.
2006-12-08 22:51:24 · answer #4 · answered by curious~me 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good language skills. Where are you from ?
2006-12-08 22:48:55 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what do u want chat with us or help about english,
2006-12-08 22:55:00 · answer #6 · answered by KUMAR 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sports...not sport....won.... not win....welcome to chat with....no
2006-12-08 22:50:35 · answer #7 · answered by catywhumpass 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
did you ask a question?
2006-12-08 22:46:37 · answer #8 · answered by Bazil 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋