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I'm a korean.


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Did you go to outside?

It is raining, I think rain makes men sentimental.

I'd like to ask for some kind of music which is suited for this situation.

What is your favorite music related in rain?

Thank you for reading my poor English, and correct my sentences.

2006-12-08 12:23:52 · 7 answers · asked by Iamman 1 in Society & Culture Languages

7 answers

All I can see are 'corrected' and possibly 'music-related'

2006-12-08 12:27:28 · answer #1 · answered by TCFKAYM 4 · 0 0

Did you go to outside?
DID YOU GO OUTSIDE?

It is raining, I think rain makes men sentimental.
CORRECT

I'd like to ask for some kind of music which is suited for this situation.
SUITED TO THIS SITUATION

What is your favorite music related in rain?
MUSIC RELATING TO RAIN

Thank you for reading my poor English, and correct my sentences.
AND CORRECTING MY SENTENCES

You did better than most English people.

2006-12-08 12:27:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

1 - Did you go outside ?
2 - OK
3 - What music would be suitable to this situation ?
4 - What is your favorite music related to rain ?

Hope this helps

Joe C

2006-12-08 12:33:29 · answer #3 · answered by joec702 1 · 0 0

Numbers 3 is difficult without context and by what you've said, I tried my best.

(a) Did you go outside?
(b) (sounds good to me)
(c) ~What is the music best suited to this situation?
(d) What's your favorite music about/on the subject of rain?

2006-12-08 12:27:14 · answer #4 · answered by Jamie 3 · 0 0

Okay, there's several answers for you already and I don't wanna repeat it. :)

Anyway, I wonder if this will work for number 3.

I'd like to ask for some music which is suitable for this situation (or occasion).

2006-12-08 12:33:37 · answer #5 · answered by gsn_1987 3 · 0 0

Number one seems correct. Number two is a comma spiced sentence. Number three should say "that" instead of "which". Number four ... I'm not sure what you're trying to say.

2006-12-08 12:38:50 · answer #6 · answered by danika1066 4 · 0 0

One more, that everyone missed:

Your grammar can be INCORRECT. Not "mistaken".

Example: "Please correct my grammatically incorrect expressions".


Take care! :(O)

2006-12-08 13:32:44 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 0 0

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