This Kiss
by Martini
we stood in the doorway
his hands on my waist
the clock tickling loudly
almost in haste
he moved in closer
his eyes locked in mine
I long for his kiss
For just a moment in time
his lips meet mine
and I feel the sensation
no longer must I wait
to give into the sweet temptation
my knees go weak
my palms become sweaty
I go back to that place
I have been so many times already
the world disappears
all that's left is him and I
and as we pull away
I feel as though I could fly
2006-12-07 23:21:15 · 21 answers · asked by lou 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
good one, i'll have to show that to my huuby later
2006-12-07 23:23:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful
2006-12-07 23:38:15 · answer #2 · answered by sez 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, Lou
Very touching, I have to admit...
I myself am a writer of romance and poetic adventurous delights.
Keep writing Lou, I see bright horizons for you âº
I would really like to read some more of your poems, if I may.
(have a look at this website: http://www.mypoetry.co.uk)
My e-mail: compudoc@myself.com
PS: That must have been a very good kiss âº
2006-12-07 23:33:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a corny Westlife song! It's a bit romantacised I think.
2006-12-07 23:25:04 · answer #4 · answered by long_luscious_lashes 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dandy,swiftly pleasant Now email to my wife in Phils.for me
2006-12-07 23:25:23 · answer #5 · answered by moaistatue 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit on the nauseous side but yeah......describes a good one very well.
2006-12-07 23:26:51 · answer #6 · answered by rondavous 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww wow what a poem, i would say this would be true for me and my gf
2006-12-08 02:37:36 · answer #7 · answered by Chappers 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The girl is just having her imagination,I guess or maybe dreaming.
2006-12-07 23:23:59 · answer #8 · answered by AmandaNikolah 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That poem is a pile of mushy poop
2006-12-07 23:25:52 · answer #9 · answered by K 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very tempting.. I felt like kissisng when I read it.
2006-12-07 23:25:06 · answer #10 · answered by petra 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's a good poem for high school level writing.. and yes it has been true..
2006-12-07 23:24:04 · answer #11 · answered by LokoLobo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋