i am about to send this sentence to my teacher ... can u please help me by correcting it or suggest me some other way to say it ------------------the sentence -------------his is t """"Here is my revised research project. if you have the time , please send me your feedback before the classtime.
Thanks."""""""""
2006-12-07 16:51:01 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Here is my revised research project. If you have time, please send me your feedback before class.
2006-12-07 16:54:22 · answer #1 · answered by ignoramus 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try this -
Please find attached my revised research project.
I would appreciate if you could find the time to send me
your feedback prior to class.
Thank you for your assistance.
Kill them with kindness when you are asking for a favor.
2006-12-07 17:02:05 · answer #2 · answered by COOKIE 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Per our discussion, I have revised my research project. I want to thank you in advance for reviewing my revision and providing me feedback before class."
These sentences make it more professional, yet sincere and appreciative.
2006-12-07 20:22:06 · answer #3 · answered by AIEnglishPro 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here is my revised research project. Please send me your feeback before class if you have time. Thank you.
2006-12-07 17:02:37 · answer #4 · answered by godeep 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me, but you should take out the space after the word "time."
2006-12-07 16:54:15 · answer #5 · answered by MJ 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋