why all of this heartbreak,
seemingly every where,
why do you forget me,
why don't you care?
i know very well,
that i'm never good enough for you,
but why do you tell me,
how little i mean, how my life should be through.
i know this already,
theres no need to say,
it only causes me pain,
that doesnt ever go away.
2006-12-06 10:23:03 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
to my parents.
2006-12-06 10:24:25 · update #1
by the way people I'm only 12 years old!! lol keep that in mind!
2006-12-06 14:08:15 · update #2
PLEASE. im begging you to get help. you answered one of my questions saying that you are abused and cut. PLEASE get help baby please! When I get older my dream is to be a social worker to help children going though this. Yes, your parents are abusing you and you need to end it. Yes, I also realize that you love your parents deep down and dont want to change their lives with this news being told to other but you have got to! please im begging you hunny! If you ever want to talk just answer back to one of my questions with ur email or just say you want my email and we can talk..stay stong girl
2006-12-06 10:52:56 · answer #1 · answered by whereHAVEallTHEcowboysGONE 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not too bad.
Myself, I am really partial to the Haiku. It is difficult to do the old 5-7-5 thing and still make sense.
2006-12-06 18:26:48 · answer #2 · answered by khanofali 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
girl i like yo poem i see u r creative like me i want to be a poet when i get older and i have a book of poems so u keep doin what u doin
2006-12-06 19:40:38 · answer #3 · answered by princess 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's good, but it's kind of depressing. You should try writing more up-beat poetry. Like, um, something about your dog or sunny days.
2006-12-06 18:26:09 · answer #4 · answered by Amigurl 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i my self like to write, it is good so long as you write from the heart and enjoy it, and at the same time take the sadness out, write like you crazy...
2006-12-06 18:58:08 · answer #5 · answered by mariposa 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
how much of an a** does that six_times dude look like?
Anyways!! it is depressing yeah... but it's good. it says a lot and its hard to write a good poem
I hope its not true tho.
2006-12-06 18:39:39 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
a bit deep kinda depressing you need to find a real horney guy and spend the weekend in bed
2006-12-06 18:26:37 · answer #7 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it is really good. it took me a second to see it was for your parents. it'll pass, you won't be 14 forever.
2006-12-06 22:03:45 · answer #8 · answered by happyday to you 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sad.
your parents? thats depressing.
i can relate,
I like that its kinda simple, yet enough to go deep.
Good Job!
2006-12-06 18:39:56 · answer #9 · answered by Anna Banana 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
seems sincere. I hope you're not being treated that way by someone.
2006-12-06 18:25:03 · answer #10 · answered by pzratnog 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋