Poetry seems to get many different responses..So...Have you ever felt as if, Your life has reached the end...?

Question

Of the ladder you once were so adamant, in your attempt to ascend...
Past the low points and on to the higher, The place you felt at ease...
Where you could afford to provide for another, No pity or sarcasm please...
Have you felt so lost that you could not percieve a smile on the happiest day?
Did you fake one for the sake of good company, and cry as they went away?
Is it better to conceal all emotion, to be tough and fall apart inside?
Or should you just break down like a child, next to the one whom you can confide?
To God I pray that I'll see the light, that may lead me out of this haze,
That obstructs my view of where I should be, I feel I've been wandering for days!
I'll most likely get poor results from this, from a report of "Answers Abuse"
For many, this site is the only way, to avoid becoming withdrawn and recluse!
Happy Holidays to all of you, May your season bring Joy to your heart...
I feel as if I've lost my will to repair.. as my hopes are just falling apart!

Answer 1

Your line: "I feel as if I've lost my will to repair.. as my hopes are just falling apart!" made me so sad.... I hope you don't give up. I know what it's like to feel like nothing works out for you and stuff... believe me..I have spent the last 6 months of my life pretty much in bed due to a fall that left me having to go through months of physiotherapy. Myself and my hubsand write poetry, which is what brought me to your page..I saw the word "Poetry" and had to read it. We actually started our own publishing company (he had another before but he scraped it so that we could start one together)...If you want to talk at all, please feel free to email me....I believe that I have it set up so that you can email me through here....
Both he and I have felt depressed for years so we both understand how you feel...
I just wanted to write to you and let you know that you're not alone... :) { hugs } Take care

Answer 2

Very nice poem, although sad. (I hear you and feel you.) Keep writing and that will help. However, reaching out and touching real people instead of online people would be of more value to you. Also, realize that a certain amount of turmoil will come into each and every life ... no more, no less. As you go through turmoil, realize that once it passes, joy and happiness is near. There must always be balance, so the good times are near. Blessings to you, my friend.

Answer 3

Have you ever been published? The first part of that one made me cry just a little (but it may also have to do with the fact that I’ve had a very intense day myself). You should think about getting published if you haven’t. You’re a talented writer. Do you just write them all at once without having to think to hard about it?

Answer 4

Some people are just too obtuse
And report you with "answers abuse"
But don't feel sad and don't pout
Just create another account!
Happy Holidays - a hug and a kiss
From another R&S Atheist

Answer 5

Flashbulbs bleeding in my brain, virgins grinning in their shame love's lightless gloom and the smell of the decay, the eyes of the butcher gleaming, he's waiting to repay. Have you ever kissed the needle and tasted the sun? And I start to think I may be the only one...........

Answer 6

Pretty good.