What is this thing
that they call life
is it just living,
or having a husband or wife
Im too young to get married,
and i dont have a clue,
were can i find
a life thats new?
i heard wen u die
and go to heven,
there's somthing called
a recarnation.
were u can come back
in a new body,
a new face, a new self,
and new abilites.
but how can i die?
again im too young,
im not sick or in danger,
and i didn't get stung.
does it hurt when u die?
wat is it like?
id talk to my mom,
but we'd get in a fight.
so on the computer,
i type in a serch
it brings me to a website
called "Mary's Perch,"
its talking about suicide,
i wonder wat that is
and look at that,
ill take their quiz.
It says i should
use poison gas
or try and cut
myself with glass
im talking to
some ppl now,
and for some reason they
keep asking me how
So i tell them why
i want to die and
they listen w/ out a lie.
So i listen to wat
they have to say
about how to
pass away.
So i carry out
a dirty deed
and suddenly my neck
starts to bleed
It hurts so bad,
i dont no y
so this is wat its like
yo die...
2006-12-05 23:33:56 · 14 answers · asked by you. 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Sublime skill... just make sure that doesn't become your daily attitude about life
2006-12-05 23:42:22 · answer #1 · answered by The_Tempest 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You know what.you've got talent and style! But why waste it?
You can use that gift to inspire people to do better,make relationships work,opposing forces agree etc.etc.
With a little more honing of that gift you can sell books and write songs then make plenty of money which in turn you use to help people.Then you make this world a better place to live.
I was in the States once and I heard Frank Sinatra tell the young George Michael-"Yours is a gift that you have to share to the world ! Don't use it to make this world depressed."
So don't inspire people to tie megaton bombs on their bodies to blow up buildings but inspire them to achieve and live their dream.
Good luck!
2006-12-06 07:44:54 · answer #2 · answered by wolfass 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Research and poetry are very intelligent things to do, but
remember research has no conclusion and poetry is feelings
you have inside, that you want to share with others or just with
yourself. If your not looking at this from either angle, I suggest
you seek help.
2006-12-06 07:47:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
enough of your poems. You have a talent for words, its to bad that you spend your energy on the sad and hurtful side of life.
But you have life, and you make your life the way you want it. so continue on and the energy you choose to be in.
But it is a waste of my energy to read another, or respond to what I believed to be of more substance.
2006-12-06 07:51:38 · answer #4 · answered by livelovelaugh 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whoa, thats heavy... Its good, but kind of morbid...
I feel that way actually right now... I'm always questioning life and its purpose...
I just know it does get better...
2006-12-06 07:38:27 · answer #5 · answered by Milkywayman22 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good poem, but alittle distrubing. Hopefully you realize that life will get better, you said you were young, so hang in there, tomorrow will be better.
2006-12-06 07:39:18 · answer #6 · answered by jeanjean 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stop trying to grab for attention.
2006-12-06 07:37:16 · answer #7 · answered by Brit 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
You're good but if you think about suicide that much you need help. (and i'm not trying to be mean)
2006-12-06 08:15:13 · answer #8 · answered by AJ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
your poem is very deep and meaningful. its excellent in fact. i hope it is just a poem and something your not considering to do :-(
2006-12-06 07:37:43 · answer #9 · answered by xxSHORTYxx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to long, jump off a high building alot better
2006-12-06 07:38:11 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋