so hard
it so hard for me to express the way i feel
when this broken heart of mine is still trying to heal
my one true love left me, am now in a daze
its like im trapped in a continuous maze
just when i thought i couldn't find a way out
i took a chance and tried a new route
i must have choose the right path because it led me right to you
and now my grass is green again and by skys back to blue
but i hope she catches the hints and all me childish clues
and makes the right decision when the time comes to choose
because its all up to you, just follow your heart
and no matter the decision i still see you as a work of art
because your beautiful and you already know it
and everyone can see it so u dont need to show it
and i learned an important lesson today that i have to announce
its really not whats on the inside but wats on the outside that counts
cuz im not good looking, hot, or fine
thats why im women less and so out of line
2006-12-05 20:28:46 · 11 answers · asked by guy 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
cool. go on. but remember girls are made to brake hearts ;( mostly!!!!
2006-12-05 20:34:09 · answer #1 · answered by M*K*H 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your salted tears mingle with mine; I long for days of sunlit sea coast journeys. Even the minnows abdomen up in a line convey a quiver to my lips. I had a thought that the earth's ocean could be the place the secrets and techniques have been hidden. Now i will work out no depths interior the sea the photos come to me, unbidden of a shy octopus cowering in a tank, seals and walrus' now no longer enjoying, as a substitute they circle a deliver that sank happy that the drowned ones are staying. sometime quickly, a deliver on the moon will leave out ineffective earth for yet another. The prophecies of doom linger and loom; Bless you on your sorrow, my Brother.
2016-10-04 22:54:20 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quite good with lots of heartbroken thoughts. Structure it slightly as it appears more as a prose.
2006-12-05 20:32:19 · answer #3 · answered by Subhasis G 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice.. :-) you know I used to write poems too..when Im still searching for that special someone..and now that I have found him..I've stopped..It's because I don't have the need to write what I feel anymore...I just express my love through actions with him..
2006-12-05 20:41:06 · answer #4 · answered by princess ysa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is very good. keep writing and expressing yourself like this.
2006-12-05 20:34:22 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
not enough feel and art inside yours...
maybe just 1 star for you...
2006-12-05 20:43:15 · answer #6 · answered by eL'do-radO 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wooooo heartbroken... what a poem!!! really cool... keep writing... so nice.... yeahh yeahhh rock on guy!!!
2006-12-05 20:30:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
what?still not over yet well i think ishould go to sleep again!
2006-12-05 20:31:36 · answer #8 · answered by Mr.cool guy 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
have you tried the gay rooms on yahoo chat?
2006-12-05 20:30:30 · answer #9 · answered by a_bike_guy 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that is very good
2006-12-05 20:33:19 · answer #10 · answered by CROSS 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋