you dont have money, you dont have anything
there are 60 minutes in an hour
and 4 quaters in a dollar
therefore time is money
and money equals power
they say money cant buy you love
it can only get you fame
but without money there is no love
and with love comes pain
sometimes i think there is no such thing as love
yah i know it sounds pretty funny
but people never love you for you
they only love you for your money
so in reality money can buy love
and happiness, everything you need
so thats why i say work now
while your life is still a seed
2006-12-05 20:20:23 · 10 answers · asked by guy 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
where you're copying all these stuff??? They are nice. I want the 10 points. Thanks
2006-12-05 20:23:04 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It doesn't necessarily have to rhyme but it needs to hit my emotions. I think clarity of expression is important as well. I don't like to second guess what I'm reading about. I always look for what I term "poetic gems"in the text.
2016-05-22 23:30:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lot of contrasts in the poem. Quite good and true too.
There are many things in life
That money can never buy.
You take love with you,
But not money when you die.
OMG!! That has become one more stanza to your poem !!
Best wishes and Happy writing,
Subhasis
2006-12-05 20:27:25 · answer #3 · answered by Subhasis G 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
a very realistic poem. oh did you know that:
if you are creative and all-inspired
you can write your poem and earn some money?
isn't that a great idea?
to gain from the chain of money?
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2006-12-05 20:47:25 · answer #5 · answered by ghg g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you are depressed. does your Gf cheat on you for money?!
any way not bad ;) i loved the meaning but i dont know the rules english poems!!!
2006-12-05 20:27:13 · answer #6 · answered by M*K*H 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You sound really depressed.
2006-12-05 20:41:38 · answer #7 · answered by Sunrise 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad
2006-12-05 20:22:37 · answer #8 · answered by dragon_2877 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
you learned how to count. CONGRATULATIONS
2006-12-05 20:22:29 · answer #9 · answered by Robert A 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good
2006-12-05 20:23:10 · answer #10 · answered by Milo 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋