makin it on my own
over the past 19 years ive been babied, everything given to me
but now i have my own life and living so free
makin money and holding my own
its like im in heaven, a king on his thrown
making my own decisions, choosing my own routes
working two jobs and no time to go out
being responsible, yet not quite secure
still searching for love as the days become fewer
i know im bored, writing poems hour after hour
talking all that sweet stuff, like a girls love is that of a flower
so i'll get right to the point so i dont sound like a fag
someone give me a ****** beer, i need to get jag
2006-12-05 20:17:12 · 6 answers · asked by guy 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It's the cry of a lone heart though rich yet denied of true love. need the security that love could give and the confidence that affection can bring
2006-12-05 20:20:46 · answer #1 · answered by ELIZABETH KING 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
far owt man ur good az u should submit that in to a contest or sumfin thats a great poem keep writin its the bomb!
2006-12-06 04:21:22 · answer #2 · answered by talkitive_kiwi 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it. Maybe you should submit it to poetry.com and let them see how good you are. Good luck and keep on writing.
2006-12-06 04:23:38 · answer #3 · answered by Dianne R 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
days getting fewer? you're still a baby, and while I have no room to talk, you sound like your 19.
2006-12-06 04:19:11 · answer #4 · answered by aprillindee 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
uhu.. not bad.. keep writing poems ;o)
2006-12-06 04:19:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
LOVE IT!!
2006-12-06 04:21:34 · answer #6 · answered by rhonda_seiler 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋