i don't know how to start.ok...let me start this way... don't think about anything before you read the letter completely. it is perfectly absolutely necessary that i tell u this...i have very strong feelings for u..i think you know that already, but what u might not know is that u r the first girl with whom that has happened to me, and believe me, it is a special feeling.
but the twist in the story is that i think u also have some feelings for me, but i don't know how strong they are...i need you to help me with this confusion. please remember this thing -- you can lie to me and say whatever u want to, but it will be very difficult for u to lie to yourself. u don't have to answer me directly, but if u think the things i wrote above makes sense do this thing. ask me out on a date as if u never read this letter.if u think the things i said above are bullshit, u don't have to do anything, just tell me that it's bullshit, and i'll be satisfied.
2006-12-05 17:52:39 · 20 answers · asked by askance 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think that it's a sweet letter, but before I sent it, if it was me, I would correct the spelling of words like YOU and ARE. It will make you seem more mature and more to be taken seriously.
2006-12-05 17:54:54 · answer #1 · answered by j3nny3lf 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's good. It's straight to the point and really tells her how you feel. I would take out the word "bullshit", but other than that, I like it. I have a hard time taking letters seriously that are full of all the "fluffy" romantic stuff like some of the other posts were submitting.I like it straight and to the point, with some attention paid to what you are saying, and I think that's what you've done. But that's just one girl's opinion.
2006-12-06 02:12:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
its a sarcastic love letter,
not genuine, i dont feel the love in it
if i were the girl i would think you are being a jerk
you dont sound sincere
and why would you ask her to ask you out
instead tell her what you feel about her
how you want to paint her picture
of how you want to sing a song for her
of how she inspires you and motivates you
tell her that you love her and you dont care whether that means you could be rejected
the point is that youve tried
tell her you are hoping that she also feels the same way you do
but if she does not feel the same way atleast she knows you care for her
thats the way to write a letter
2006-12-06 01:55:42 · answer #3 · answered by haringmarumo 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is a decent letter but it is more likely to scare her off. Not because it is creepy but rather it shows a lack of guts. Yes it takes guts to write it, but it takes even more guts to talk to her in person. And when you are talking to her, the best thing to pay attention to is her eyes. Is she looking you in the eyes? Are her pupils large? etc.
good luck.
2006-12-06 02:32:00 · answer #4 · answered by tree daddy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I THINK YOU NEED TO RE WRITE THAT LETTER, ONLY THIS TIME BE A LITTLE MORE ATTENTIVE AND RESPECTFUL. USE WORDS THAT WILL GRAB AT THE PERSONS HEART STRINGS, NOT PISS THEM OFF. SOMETHING LIKE:" I FEEL THE WARMTH EMITTING FROM YOUR HEART WHEN I AM NEAR YOU, IT IS A SPECIAL THING THIS FEELING. I DON'T WANT TO BE ALONE IN THIS DEEP SEEDED PASSION I FEEL FOR YOU!" YOU KNOW SOMETHING LIKE THAT! CATER TO THE PERSONS MIND AND HEART TO GET TO THE TRUTH OF HOW THEY FEEL. GOOD LUCK AND GOD BLESS............
2006-12-06 02:01:04 · answer #5 · answered by strawberry_nocturnal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Scrap the letter, Don Juan. Just talk to her directly!
2006-12-06 01:55:29 · answer #6 · answered by catwomanmeeeeow 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Looks direct... I would leave out the parts where you plan their exit...
Love letters should be about love. Leave the outcome to the Universe.
2006-12-06 01:56:00 · answer #7 · answered by myk833 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I mean if this is what you "truly" want to say then go for it. Remember say what's on your heart and what is truthful after you do that then it doesn't matter who likes or doesn't like your letter.
2006-12-06 01:57:17 · answer #8 · answered by DLB 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
well, I'm not really one for love letters, but its good. it shows guts and it shows that you are willing to take a risk...which isn't common with guys in this day and age so I think she will appreciate that. AND well done for NOT saying that you love her - that would have been a bit much.
2006-12-06 01:59:12 · answer #9 · answered by supagrrrl84 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
love letter? Far from it. It sounds like you're insecure.... love letters should be romantic... sorry, but this sucks... If someone wrote this to me, I'd be like what? I'd probably look at him and go, is this supposed to impress me?
2006-12-06 01:55:32 · answer #10 · answered by wolfgirl1987 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋