Everyone was there Lily even?

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Everyone was there Lily even?

what is the mistake in this sentence?

2006-12-05 02:44:48 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Home Schooling

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It might be better to say: "Everyone was there, including Lily." But, if you want to stay with the original wording, you might use: "Everyone was there--even Lily."

2006-12-05 10:18:11 · answer #1 · answered by JD 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Everyone was there ,even Lily. Is how it should be worded.

2006-12-05 10:46:50 · answer #2 · answered by queenmaeve172000 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋

Semi colon between there and Lily.

2006-12-05 11:06:44 · answer #3 · answered by True101 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Well you could just reverse Lily and even and I think that would fix it? And add puncutation. Everyone was there, even Lily.

2006-12-05 10:46:18 · answer #4 · answered by ☺ PeeJ ☺ 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋