your choice
Long Gone
I wake up every morning
And before long
I realize that
You are long gone
I wasted my time
I thought we were tight
But know you left me
With out a fight
I was mopy
I was sad
And I realize
I should be glad
Your long gone for a reason
You were never meant to stay
We would never last
Any way
2006-12-04 17:03:24 · 4 answers · asked by Lion_Luver 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
I don't think it's a great poem, however it sounds pretty good as song lyrics.
2006-12-04 17:05:41 · answer #1 · answered by JimmytheKing 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it the last three parts sound like the chorus of a song
2006-12-05 01:07:28 · answer #2 · answered by Neva 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good and insightfull. I think it would make a great song. Good job.
2006-12-05 01:05:59 · answer #3 · answered by Peanut Butter 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice start... but finish it!!
2006-12-05 01:06:17 · answer #4 · answered by 【ツ】ρεαcε! 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋