is this poem okay? for a girl who ive been seeing on the internet
ive been seeing her about 4 days
its called i think of you
i think of you
in the morning
i think of you
all night
even as i write this poem
its begining
to become light
all i ask of you today
is to be happy for the day
just smile what can i say!
and i will too
as i think of you
2006-12-04 11:52:05 · 29 answers · asked by mom e 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
dude if you've only been seeing her for four days don't you think you should wait a little bit longer to give her an emotional poem. I mean come on man, I would be way creeped out if some guy i just met wrote me a poem. wait as along as possible to give it to her, the more you get to know each other the more it's going to mean to her.
2006-12-04 11:55:31 · answer #1 · answered by brunettebelle10 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
I think any effort someone makes to express their emotions in a poem to another person is sweet...It needs a little work but its worth giving to her and I am sure it will put a smile on her face...
2006-12-04 11:56:27 · answer #2 · answered by Happy2bAlive 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Why would you write a poem for someone you have never seen. It might not even be a girl...it could be some dude
2006-12-04 11:55:50 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
It's fine. Just always write what's in your heart & you'll be fine. Even if she's not into poetry or doesn't like the poem, she will fall in love with the fact that you took time to write it for HER. Good luck.
2006-12-04 11:54:45 · answer #4 · answered by Jason E 2 · 2⤊ 2⤋
It is a really sweet, and thoughtful poem. Nice job.
2006-12-04 11:56:01 · answer #5 · answered by Kaitlyn Dawn ஜ۩۞۩ஜLoveஜ۩۞۩ஜ 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
4 DAYS??? Maybe you can shorten it up and just say "Hey, I thought of you today" and take it a lottle slower loverboy. Wait for a couple weeks for the 'I think of you' poems. Otherwise tell her what you are REALLY thinking...LOL
2006-12-04 11:55:57 · answer #6 · answered by twest_dgo 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it's a nice poem. but i think you should make sure that she is really a girl before you get too attached to her...lol
2006-12-04 11:54:22 · answer #7 · answered by Shookoolate 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
NO its ok if a child wrote it
I'm sorry, did i hurt your feelings? lol
You know I'm kidding you really shouldn't give a **** what others think, just do you thing. Forget these guy's opinion always do what you feel is right
2006-12-04 11:58:56 · answer #8 · answered by lululu 2 · 1⤊ 2⤋
is there ever a bad poem as long as she likes it thats all that matters
2006-12-04 11:54:39 · answer #9 · answered by PASSION 3 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Not bad, its a good start. They don't have to rhyme. Put more heart into it - be creative. Not saying its bad tho.
2006-12-04 11:54:50 · answer #10 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋