i've been writing poetry for the past 8 years. this is one i wrote a few years ago. some of my more recent ones are on poetry.com and i've even been published in some of their books.
SECRET PLACE
I have plans for you and me
We'll sit beneath the willow tree
Talking, laughing, flirting and more
Hugs, kisses, and hungry touches
I'm happy in our secret place
Only seeing your beautiful face
My heart is running a wild race
And you have become my prize
We wait for darkness to become light
We stay together the entire night
I kiss you with all my might
Anything for you, my secret love
As the darkness begins to fade
We get up from where we've stayed
I could stay forever where we laid
But I kiss you one last kiss goodbye
2006-12-04 04:12:35
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answered by Anonymous
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Unless you are a genius skip the poem, to hard to get right. Most women think that is so passe'. Instead think of writing a letter. Think Napolean writing Josephine.... old school. Look it up. You don't have to rhyme. It must be hand written and if you really want to make a splash buy a cool parchment envelope with the cool paper and do the whole sealing wax thing. Women appreciate a guy taking effort to do something that is so old school romantic. You have to step into that section of the store that women inhabit for starters. Its not really what you say... its what you went through to do it.
2006-12-04 12:22:53
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answered by jackson 7
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Cosmic Electricity
In an ancient occurrence of moment,
Two hearts, one soul united,
Breathing in ceaseless bliss and opulence of love.
A bond of cosmic electricity unparalleled and unrivaled.
Exceptional and authentic,
Eloquent infinite potential
Challenging, acquisitive limits beyond mortal man.
Similar to interpretation of a noble narrative,
Or presentation of an epic film,
It is overflowing with corridors of amusement,
Whimpers, elation and melancholy,
Exhilaration and sorrow,
But ultimately,
You saunter absent sensing contentment
Understanding the remnants
Of craving, hungering for the next adventure,
The next communal flash of rapture.
Acknowledging this mutual undertaking previously,
Someplace in the cosmic prior to,
Aspiring, anticipating, visualizing
Disclosing the unconditional unification yet again.
Mbp©2005
2006-12-04 12:15:50
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answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7
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A love poem is one that you write by yourself. If i gave you one then it would be nothing. It would be just a poem you took not a love poem. You must not be in love your u wouldnt need some else is poem
2006-12-04 12:09:21
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answered by maeseason 2
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give details and info about what you want. It's a little easier if there's a topic of interest and not something as general as ''a love poem''.
2006-12-04 12:07:52
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answered by Anonymous
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just think about her and put how you feel into the poem. dont let someone call you a wuss for reading poetry to a girl. it helps with her liking you. just pull words from your heart
2006-12-04 12:08:46
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answered by jr 1
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There once was a man from Nantucket
whose d*ck was so long he could suc* it
while wiping his chin
he said with a grin
"If my ear was a c*nt, I would f*ck it"
2006-12-04 12:17:12
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answered by half sam, half amazing 4
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Recognition
Iam strong
and I am frail
I am wise and I am wild
Iam open and Iam shy.
How could I know all this
If I hadn't seen myself with your eyes.
2006-12-04 12:10:12
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answered by uncoolmom 5
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LOVE IS EASY TO GET
BUT HARD TO FORGET
2006-12-04 12:25:47
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answered by yan 1
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No you don't. Only wussies read girls poems, and girls don't sleep with wussies :)
2006-12-04 12:06:50
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answered by will l 2
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