Up there the moon is hanging solemnly,
The night is sleeping,
Everything is so silent and still
Here I am, cold and lonely
My mind brings me back to the past
The best ages of my life
No one will understand
How much is enough
How do I struggle so hard
just to pass a day,
a brief moment in my life
I’m just nothing and shall always be
And so here I am
Dreaming about my happy childhood
It’s nothing now but just a sweet memory
And my eyes wet when I remember
how I used to be a vigorous girl
No one will ever care about me
I feel really sleepy and cold
But I know it won’t last long
After this I will once again be in my place
The wind is breezing, playing the night’s lullaby
And I close my eyes
no one will care
up there the moon is watching silently
I feel warmer now, with the night as my quilt
and I will be at ease forever more
2006-12-01 22:55:53 · 11 answers · asked by wonder why 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
What I think?
It is beautiful and just as I thought, Golden Age.
You are very talented.
And you know by now I think you are very strong willed too.
This is why it is so difficult now, but as you say: soon it will end and you will be reunited with your beloved ones.
Living beloved ones.
We, your friends here, are going to support you.
Go on with poetry, that we can put answers.
Little Tree, the stars, the moon and even your classmates if you realise they CAN'T possibly understand what you are going through will seem less indifferent....
2006-12-02 00:22:19 · answer #1 · answered by klaartedubois 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The poem is awesome! It sounds a lot like the stuff I used to write, back when I was really down and wanting to die.
However, I grew, and I learnt that that was never the best way to deal with it. I ended up writing so I wouldn't go through with it.
The best way to end everything is to keep living lol! There's always something new, something exciting and wonderful, whenever you're ready to let it in. So don't give up just yet!
2006-12-01 23:17:00 · answer #2 · answered by Callisto 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what do mean the best way to end everything? please... i feel much sadness in ur poem. everyone wants to go back to the good times and wishes that it stay that way forever but life doesn't seem to go that way. Make that inspiration for things to come. Sad times may come but pls. don't feel lonely or desperate, just remember the good times and live that life however sad it is, happiness is not permanent so is sadness, so don't worry. have an outlet like what ur doing, writing poems and pls., don't do anything drastic, ok!
2006-12-01 23:08:05 · answer #3 · answered by le mizz 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
second time I read this... I still think you should get some helpful feedback and encouragment to continue writing- No matter how young you are the creative outlet is a very good way to deal with feelings- Keep Writing and try fanstory.com
2006-12-01 23:09:36 · answer #4 · answered by admiredi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some of the most creative people in the world created their best works when they were experiencing sadness/depression. This isn't an ending, it's a beginning.
2006-12-01 23:16:09 · answer #5 · answered by Kerry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very good, and I think you need to keep writing. Your writing will help you decipher your feelings and figure out your future. Embrace your talent!
2006-12-01 23:03:13 · answer #6 · answered by Rebecca 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is a beautiful poems n it is a good hobby too to write a poems in ur age.............good luck in writing more
2006-12-01 23:06:55 · answer #7 · answered by Frendlygal 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i also love to write poems and yours is so nice but also so sad..I felt like that before...thinking no one will miss me. but i was wrong....We all get down now and then....If you ever need someone to talk to..im here...its always nice to talk to someone u dont know....star_bright_101@yahoo.com or IM me at star_bright_101 in yahoo.....
2006-12-01 23:05:00 · answer #8 · answered by Starbright 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so sad, embrace the past and bring it to your future.
2006-12-01 23:00:53 · answer #9 · answered by eyes_of_iceblue 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its beautiful
2006-12-01 22:58:17 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋