Up there the moon is hanging solemnly,
The night is sleeping,
Everything is so silent and still
Here I am, cold and lonely
My mind brings me back to the past
The best ages of my life
No one will understand
How much is enough
How do I struggle so hard
just to pass a day,
a brief moment in my life
I’m just nothing and shall always be
And so here I am
Dreaming about my happy childhood
It’s nothing now but just a sweet memory
And my eyes wet when I remember
how I used to be a vigorous girl
No one will ever care about me
I feel really sleepy and cold
But I know it won’t last long
After this I will once again be in my place
The wind is breezing, playing the night’s lullaby
And I close my eyes
no one will care
up there the moon is watching silently
I feel warmer now, with the night as my quilt
and I will be at ease forever more
2006-12-01 22:37:45 · 6 answers · asked by wonder why 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Dream another dream and so it will be,
write another poem and so it will be,
you create your destiny
Grow from your pain
Let your tears be cleansing
The past is gone
today you can create,
make anew
happy state
xxx
Lavida
2006-12-01 23:59:58 · answer #1 · answered by Lavida rose 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋
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2006-12-01 23:03:37 · answer #2 · answered by admiredi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Please reevaluate your thinking. My fiance' hung himself five years ago in his closet and evryday of my life I have to deal with that because I feel I could have and should have been able to stop him. His mother and I found him and she has been a wreck ever since. Suicide doesn't just affect you it affects everyone youknow and especially the ones who love you cause they will fell guilt for the rest of their life
2006-12-02 05:29:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
suicide is disgusting - yeah life sucks for many of us - do something constructive about it.
As an ER nurse I have seen it torture families, people die horribly miserable deaths or come near death and suffer on life support. Then your body is turned into spare parts for people who actually want to live.
2006-12-01 22:43:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Painfully beautiful.
2006-12-01 22:50:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, its good poem with your feeling come out. ya as you ask its best way explore your thinking. good.
2006-12-01 22:44:30 · answer #6 · answered by raymond_ioi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋