can anybody help me to change these words to my own words?

Question

The size of the average the pig-tailed snub-nosed monkey is between 16.3 and 50 acres (6.5 to 20 ha). Individuals are not observed deep inside other territories but are seen on the margin of adjacent territories. During encounters with other groups, the males approach, make loud vocalizations and return to their home territory with the other group members following behind. Chasing and fighting are generally not observed during these encounters

Answer 1

Sorry hon, then they wouldn't be YOUR words, they'd be OURS!

Answer 2

The size of the average the pig-tailed snub-nosed monkey is between 16.3 and 50 acres (6.5 to 20 ha). Seperately they aren't observed deep inside other territories but are often seen on the margin of adjacent territories. When the pig-tailed snub-nosed monkey encounters with other groups, the males approach while making loud vocalizations and return to their home territory with the other members of his group following behind. Although the pig-tailed snub-nose monkey chase and fight usally, people have yet to observe any kind of this behavior durning such encounter as this.

Your answer would be better if I knew more details about this pig-tailed whatchacallit

Answer 3

Sorry, but if I changed it for you, it would be my words, not yours. Just a suggestion, but if you go through and simplify it a bit - for example, would you normally say that something made 'loud vocalizations'? Or would you put it more simply? There's a lot of that kind of language in here, and changing that to your words would certainly be a step in the right direction.

Just by the way, when you say, "The size of the average the pig-tailed snub-nosed monkey" that doesn't quite make sense. Are you talking about the range of the monkey? Or the territory it claims as its own?

good luck with this.

Answer 4

No because then they will not be your own words.They will still be written via somone else. Choose an easier version to edit. Look up words in a dictionary and you will find different meanings.Good luck.

Answer 5

I hope your teacher isnt on yahoo questions. They will know that your a cheater when they read your paper on pig-tailed snub-nosed monkeys!

Answer 6

This is strictly a do it yourself project. By the way, changing the words around does not prevent it from being plagiarism. You have to include the source of this information.

Answer 7

Shouldn't be asking!

There's this thing teachers can do, where they type what you put into something on the internet, and it comes up with everything every written with those words! You could get in trouble for using OUR words.

Answer 8

if you mean para phrase this. their territorial. they have a territori of so and so. the tend to be xenophobic. exploring slowly and showing their boundaries and such.

imaging you were explaining it to a friend over the phone tomorrow with no book, only by memory. hope this helps

Answer 9

There's nothing much to change it to ur own words!! What u can do is change those hard words to much simpler ones...depending on your grade so that everyone else can understand it.

Answer 10

no. because no one here thinks like you do or can express themselves the way you can.. Besides if this is a homework assignment you should have started on it earlier!

Answer 11

um. I'm confused. How can we turn this into your own words?

And even if you do, you still have to put a footnote or it is cheating (plagiarism!)