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2006-12-01 12:08:41 · 7 answers · asked by ticktock 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
it's okay...although i won't feel ok forever
2006-12-01 12:10:50 · answer #1 · answered by Br 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-29 18:58:11 · answer #2 · answered by guillotte 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dont look back. go on and know that we all have done something we regret later.we learn and grow from these things and they give us character. you have already grown wise and tender. youll go far and climb to higher heights now.just dont look back.
2006-12-01 12:16:47 · answer #3 · answered by jbearbooboo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is dis some kinda poetry or church box confession.
2006-12-01 12:11:34 · answer #4 · answered by Infinite 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dude, I think you posted this in the wrong forum.
2006-12-01 12:11:44 · answer #5 · answered by peachy78 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
whatever.... were you trying to use only run-on sentences?
2006-12-01 12:10:41 · answer #6 · answered by Btieti 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
tictock lost his ..................................
2006-12-01 12:15:36 · answer #7 · answered by just_me_1955 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋