Today I had a rotten day
as I was coming in from play.
I accidentally stubbed my toes
and tripped and fell and whacked my nose.
I chipped a tooth. I cut my lip.
I scraped my knee. I hurt my hip.
I pulled my shoulder, tweaked my ear,
and got a bruise upon my rear.
I banged my elbow, barked my shin.
A welt is forming on my chin.
My pencil poked me in the thigh.
I got an eyelash in my eye.
I sprained my back. I wrenched my neck.
I’m feeling like a total wreck.
So that’s the last time I refuse
when teacher says to tie my shoes.
2006-12-01 11:49:50 · 23 answers · asked by Dharshi 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
lol its not at all crazy.........it's too good ..............it's just like you (lol) !!!
2006-12-02 01:51:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You must be crazy to think this poem is crazy,
Believe me it is a very beautiful poem Dharshi.
Oh Honey! You must feel like a ragged doll,
But your touching poem is not crazy at all.
Next time listen to your teacher double quick,
And you will feel wonderful not miserably sick.
There is a poetess in you creeping out I say,
I hope the next time she chooses a better day.
2006-12-02 08:27:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is a good poem with a touch of sensetivity to the poor child who had to face such a situation at a very young age.It is a plain funny poem which we see in jokes column of newspapers and magazines.
2006-12-02 02:56:38 · answer #3 · answered by the great human 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry is something that comes from within, something that YOU want to say or share with others. For as many people that think it's crazy, there will be the same amount that think it's great. Take it from me, I am having my third book published on poetry
2006-12-01 12:39:07 · answer #4 · answered by rockandrollrev 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i can't detect a be conscious that ryhmes with loopy, i'd regulate it quite "Kian is the little twister that makes us flow insane, notwithstanding i love my little brother even at the same time as he's a soreness." it really is eye-catching notwithstanding that's nevertheless cute and it classified ads a sibling like evaluate to it, like i love my brother notwithstanding usually he can be a touch worrying. Lol. wish I helped...
2016-10-16 11:24:36 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LoL i think its very interesting, it sounds like sumpin' that would prolly happen to me... :P im not a very graceful person...
2006-12-01 11:58:10 · answer #6 · answered by Krysteena A 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds good not as insane as I presumed
2006-12-01 11:51:48 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is really good! I give it a thumbs up!
:D
2006-12-01 12:04:48 · answer #8 · answered by ٭I Love The LORD!٭ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's cute.
2006-12-01 11:54:46 · answer #9 · answered by dyingatwork 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Funny and cute.
2006-12-01 11:54:14 · answer #10 · answered by Sunrise 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Crazy, no. True, yes
2006-12-01 11:51:43 · answer #11 · answered by st.uncumber 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋