The second story is a lot more interesting compared to the first story. Furthermore the characters that are being introduced are also more interesting, such as Jung and Frank. Both of them are very similar but they do have differences such as in personality, physical appearance and attitude towards family.
Unlike Jung, Frank is a well grown man who calls himself the “The Brown Bomber”. His personality differs from as Jung’s because he is a carefree person. For instance, he doesn’t care about his father, the environment around him and more importantly his own life. He spends his days and nights at different clubs, gambling places and on the streets. On the other hand, Jung cares about his life and the people that are around him. For instance, when Frank left for the Marines he felt very bad and couldn’t stop thinking about him.
Frank and Jung also differ in physical appearance. As mentioned before Frank is a well grown man with wide shoulders, strong arms and feet. He is very good at using his skills in fights. Moreover, he has fought numerous times that he is very brave by now. Jung is not as muscular, tall and strong as Frank but he is attending boxing classes to develop on his character.
Although both of their past lives are very similar, they have very different attitudes towards their family. In contrast, Frank is careless, doesn’t respect his family and doesn’t value his family or even his father who is the only one left in his family. For example, he doesn’t visit his father regularly. However, Jung has a very different point of view towards his family. He respects, values and cares for the family that had adopted him. For instance, he loves Poh-Poh and used to listen to tale or even short stories which Poh-Poh would tell him.
In a word, Jung and Frank are similar to each other but they also have a few differences which is acceptable because everyone is different.
2006-12-01 11:41:41 · 2 answers · asked by ryan s 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Studying Abroad
I'm going to do some proof-reading for you because it is a legitimate form of homework help and it's very important when submitting written things like essays, book reports, themes, etc... You already have the essay- I assume you did the work. There is no way that proof-reading is "doing your homework for you". Good job! I'm sure your teacher will have more to say, but I'll do what I can (I'm not an Eng teacher!) fyi- I have seen way more things on this site that really are people asking others to 'do their homework'.
"...and more importantly his own life." should be "and more importantly, his own life." (I added a comma)
"...and couldn’t stop thinking about him." I assume by "him" you mean his father. You need to be careful about pronouns- they can be very unclear. Would be better to replace "him" with "his father" (or whoever it is)
"As mentioned before Frank..." add a comma after before (as mentioned before, Frank)
"Moreover, he has fought numerous times that he is very brave by now." A bit unclear: try "Moreover, he has fought numerous times, so he is very brave by now."
"...develop on his character." take out the word "on" (develop his character)
"Although both of their past lives..." take out the words "both of"
"...listen to tale or even short stories..." "tale" should be plural, "tales"
2006-12-02 13:44:41 · answer #1 · answered by boots&hank 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No.
Now quit asking other people to do your homework for you.
2006-12-01 11:43:47 · answer #2 · answered by br00fa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋