I thought I saw a ghost last night—
a goblin or a ghoul,
an ugly little creature
oozing salivary drool.
It had an eerie figure
and a huge gigantic nose.
It wasn’t wearing sneakers
and was minus all its clothes.
It hovered through my bedroom
as I tried to catch some z’s.
It appeared to have a lesion
or a facial skin disease.
I rubbed the sleep from both my eyes
and loomed a little nearer.
I knew what I had seen
was just my image in the mirror.
2006-12-01 09:03:18 · 13 answers · asked by Dharshi 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Its NOT about me.....
2006-12-01 09:04:03 · update #1
it's not that bad.
what do u think of mine
I’m spinning around and around, out of control.
My mind is not all there and nobody knows
I try to stop and get off of this ride.
As soon as I get off I’m hit by the ocean’s tide.
I pull and I pull trying to get to the top.
This flow of flowing water, when will it stop.
I swim and I swim til I get to the beach.
But when I’m there my world is out of reach.
I walk and I walk trying to find the town.
When I arrive no one can be found.
I’m searching for familiar voice or face.
There doesn’t seem to be any in this place.
I just want a voice that can express in any way.
That things will be alright and everything’s okay.
I’m looking for someone whose heart is pure.
That can hold me and make me feel secure.
I search and don’t find but still I resume.
I see something move in a small dark room.
My heart starts to race with hopes of affection
To my surprise it’s a mirror and just my reflection.
i wrote it last month
2006-12-01 09:07:22 · answer #1 · answered by babyg1rl_22 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Dharshi, I think it was really cute and funny, Honey! Babyg1rl's was also very cute and original. Good work girls !
2006-12-03 03:47:49 · answer #2 · answered by the Tramp 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it's good. I like it
2006-12-01 23:28:12 · answer #3 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a funny one! I like it a lot. Good job! ;)
BTW, did you even write it, or are you just asking for an opinion on it 'cuz you found it somewhere?
2006-12-01 17:06:08 · answer #4 · answered by ♥hollister 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
It's very good.
2006-12-01 18:19:08 · answer #5 · answered by Celebrity girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good
2006-12-02 14:31:21 · answer #6 · answered by Payal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
childish, too sing-songy, the entire theme was lame.
Overall grade-"D"
2006-12-01 17:16:22 · answer #7 · answered by Pie's_Guy 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
wow that is really good....did u write it...i think it is good maybe u should change some lines here or there but i like it
2006-12-01 17:07:16 · answer #8 · answered by Eric 2 · 0⤊ 3⤋
No I did not think so but I love the imagery! You have a good nose for poetry! LOL Thanks!
2006-12-01 17:05:19 · answer #9 · answered by tigerlily_catmom 7 · 2⤊ 2⤋
good
2006-12-02 06:24:22 · answer #10 · answered by mr. x 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋