Dear diary
I am great! I feel glad that I can format my window xp today. I free like I get a new pc again. Well I still can't believe It is already in the end of this year. Well, I don't have a boy friend to hang out with me this Christmas. Luckily my best friend Alice has just came back to Hong Kong from studying in Australia. Also one of my old classmate Echo finally came back to Hong Kong after spending one and half year in Duiba for running business. So I am sure I am not totally alone during this Winter. We had already met once in the last Wednesday, also with Eva and Cherrie. We went to a Thai restaurant near President Theatre in Causeway Bay. I was so happy to meet my friends again and to taste such delious food. I love Thai food! In fact, tonight I went dinner with my dad and bro at a Thai restaurant nearby. It was our first time to visit it. Although the dishes were not as good as that one in President theatre. The curry crabs were so good & we'd great time!
2006-12-01 04:33:05 · 4 answers · asked by chocolatierdream 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Furey101 did a great job punctuating this for you, although there are a couple of things I'd like to add. Use commas before and after the word "Alice." Put a comma after the word "Also" (Also, one of my old classmates) <---also an "s" on "classmate". Put a comma after the word "business" and join those two sentences together. It's not recommended to begin a sentence with the word "So". Don't capitalize "winter" -- seasons are never capitalized. The sentence, "Although the dishes were not as good as that one in President Theatre" is not a complete sentence. Take out the period after it, insert a comma, and join those two sentences together.
2006-12-01 05:58:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear diary,
I am great! I feel glad that I can format my Windows XP today. I feel like I have gotten a new PC again! Well, I still can't believe it is already in the end of the year. [Unfortunately], I don't have a boyfriend to hang out with me this Christmas. Luckily, my best friend Alice just came back to Hong Kong from her studies in Australia. Also one of my old classmate, Echo, finally came back to Hong Kong after spending one and half years in Dubai, running a business (/managing a/his business). So I am sure I will not be totally alone this Winter. We have already met once, along with Eva and Cherrie, last Wednesday. We went to a Thai restaurant near the President Theatre in Causeway Bay. I was so happy to meet my friends again and to taste such delicious food. I love Thai food! In fact, tonight I went to dinner with my dad and bro at a Thai restaurant nearby. It was our first time to visit it. Although the dishes were not as good as those in the President Theatre. The curry crabs were so good & we'd (we'd is fine, but we had reads better) great time!
2006-12-01 12:45:09 · answer #2 · answered by the answer chancer 2 · 3⤊ 1⤋
you did a very good job. It's very detailed and descriptive. I saw only grammatical mistake. you wrote: Altough the dishes were not as good as that one in president thater. just change as good as THE one ins president theater. Everything else is good. Good luck
2006-12-01 12:38:28 · answer #3 · answered by russianguyfrombrooklyn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not sure what u are asking but u sound very lovely.I would hang out with u for christmas if I could/Merry christmas to u
2006-12-01 12:42:18 · answer #4 · answered by psychoepp 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋