What do you think...............
What’s Love………
What’s love people say how can I define it,Is it something I can capture, tune or maybe refine it.
What’s love people say when will I know its here, will it pull at your heartstrings or whisper in your ear.
What’s love people say is it something I can find,Can you see it coming and does it make you blind.
What’s love people say does it come for free Is there a hidden language that only lovers see.
What’s love people say does it make you want to die,Does it consume your every waking moment and make you want to cry.
What’s love people say does it wear out you poor heart.Does it make your breath catch ever so from the very start?
What’s love people say does it make you feel safe and calm.Do you want to hold onto it forever in your lovers palm
Then this is love that i'm feeling enjoy it love it the end!!
2006-11-30 02:56:30 · 22 answers · asked by Twinkle *little fairy* 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Aww!
2006-11-30 02:58:31 · answer #1 · answered by Natalie B 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent. However, how about starting each line with words like" People in loved say.....
Best wishes and Merry Christmas!
2006-11-30 10:59:30 · answer #2 · answered by SingGirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its lovely honey,and you sound like lovely woman.Wish i was your James.That is my name by the way.Lots of luck with your James,he's lucky to have a woman like you.Write a lot more poems honey,you got the touch!
2006-11-30 11:05:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Other than needing puncuation it is a very good poem. You did a good job. Just work on the puncuation. You know commas, periods etc.
2006-11-30 11:01:46 · answer #4 · answered by suzie 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent. As #1 said, put it to music. Great.
2006-11-30 11:03:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's hot.. you should definetely make sure he gets to hear it or read it if he hasn't already... Poetry is one of the finest art forms there are..
2006-11-30 11:42:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah I agree I'm gagging its a good poem but do you have to rub it in the faces of us poor loveless loners
2006-11-30 11:27:40 · answer #7 · answered by crownose 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! I really like it. i wish my girlfriend wrote me poetry like that. you might want to use a couple more commas to accentuate your pauses. I like it a lot.
cesar
2006-11-30 11:02:28 · answer #8 · answered by greatpharohcesar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo!
2006-11-30 12:13:17 · answer #9 · answered by ~*Angel Of Fallen Stars*~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh beautiful is the poem is
i think jammes well like it
good luck
2006-11-30 10:59:17 · answer #10 · answered by amaja_92 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋