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1. the evaluated total surface that needed to be repainted was of…
2. new prepainted wood was used as covering in the offices
3. …were directly acquired from the suppliers
4. new laws in the work field were released
5. the price of the brands was not the only feature to be considered for the purchasing
6. prices of the brands were compared according to the funds granted
7. it was thought that the main features would be the following
8. they radiated toxic gases after two years the paint had been used
9. innovative interior decoration views advised against the use of artificial or cold colours
10. high quality brands of paint disrupted in a longer time than the lower quality ones
11. it was found that the seven analyzed brands were in line with minimum standards

2006-11-29 08:26:01 · 1 answers · asked by Schottentor 2 in Education & Reference Other - Education

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Some of these aren't quite right, but it's a little difficult to know how to correct them without seeing more of the context.

1. The word "evaluated" does not work here. Maybe start with, "According to the evaluation, the total surface..."
2. You need the article "a" in front of "covering. " "Was used as a covering..." I am not sure "covering" is the right word, but I don't know that much about interior decorating terminology.
3. Fine.
4. Not sure what you mean by work "field" but otherwise okay.
5. You should say, "in the purchasing" instead of "for the purchasing."
6. Not sure if this okay; would need to know more.
7. Fine.
8. Rewrite: "Two years after the paint had been used, toxic gases radiated from the paint."
9. The "views" can't "advise." Only people can advise.
10. The word "disrupted" is not right here. I am not sure what you are trying to say here.
11. I would move the word "analyzed" to after "brands," but otherwise this is fine.

2006-11-29 08:34:48 · answer #1 · answered by braennvin2 5 · 0 0

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