English menu: my voacabulary problems?

Question

I've translated menu into English. could you please check if I managed to use appropriate words? thanks a lot in advance :)

1.Prunes with chocolate, under a whipped cream eiderdown, sprinkled with nuts
2.Veal fillet in crispy batter served with an egg, new potatoes, peas and carrots
3.Veal cutlets served on a bed of orange-agaric mushrooms with noodles
4. Beef sirloin fillet baked with mozzarella cheese under spinach, recommended with slices of toast
5. Mozzarella cheese layered with a loin of pork with tomatoes on a potato base

Thanks :)

Answer 1

1.Prunes with SCRUMPTIOUS chocolate, under a whipped cream BLANKET, sprinkled with CRUNCHY nuts
2.TENDER Veal fillet in A crispy batter served with a POACHED egg, new potatoes, FRESH peas and carrots
3.SUCCULENT Veal cutlets served on a bed of TANGY orange-agaric mushrooms with noodles
4. TENDER Beef sirloin fillet baked with mozzarella cheese under spinach, SERVED with slices of toast
5. CREAMY Mozzarella cheese layered with a TASTY loin of pork with FRESH tomatoes on a potato base

sounds good to me,

i added a few words to make it sound tastier, it always looks better with a few of these words

Helen x x x

Answer 2

Change "fillet" to "filet" for the beef and veal. "Fillet" is used primarily for fish.

2. Veal filet in A crispy batter
3. What kind of noodles, be specific
4. Recommended? Or does the dish come with the toast?

Just some thoughts.

Answer 3

It all sounds delicious and I've never had any of these dishes but they sound ok. The first one might be better worded as "under a blanket of whipped cream" Yum!

Answer 4

Dear dreamah: that's the British way of spelling, with the 'e'. Canadians spell that way too.

Anyway, when's dinner? It all sounds tasty.

Answer 5

sounds good! tomato dosen't have an e on it, other that that sounds great!