I promise you my love
I promise you my heart
I promise you my life
I promise we'll never be apart
I promise not to hurt you
I promise to never make you cry
I promise to always trust you
I promise not to lie
I promise you forever
I promise you tonight
I promise you my respect
I promise to do things right
I promise to always be there
I promise until the end
I promise to always love you
I promise to be your best friend
I promise you my love
I promise you my life
I promise this forever
I promise our friendship is my life
your the PEANUT to my BUTTER ,
your the STAR to my BURST,
your the M to my M,
your the POP to my TART,
your the MILKY to my WAY,
your the FRUIT to my LOOP,
your the MILK to my DUDS,
your the LUCKY to my CHARMS,
your the ICE to my CREAM,
your the GHETTO to my BOOTY,
but mostly....
your the BEST to my FRIEND
2006-11-27 18:25:45 · 12 answers · asked by aznflippgurl 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
it's great..very original n also touching but mostly it was very fun and sweet!!!
2006-11-27 18:46:59 · answer #1 · answered by Rican Prinzez 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You were doing real well until you got to the Peanut to my Butter! Yuck! I'd rather skip that bit if I were you. It spoils the rest. Otherwise, good going!
2006-11-27 18:39:23 · answer #2 · answered by dragonfly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a nice gesture, but to be honest, I don't think it's very good. It's just a bunch of redundant phrases. You're obviously not truly saying what's in your heart.. It's not raw and pure
2006-11-27 18:43:13 · answer #3 · answered by pussnboots333 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was well written.It capatured your emotion,put you in the moment, left you wanting more.Then it crashed on the last 12 lines.The last 12 lines sound out of place with the rest of the poem.Other then that I loved It.
2006-11-27 18:33:12 · answer #4 · answered by noga 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I really thought that it is very sweet and nice! Any friend who receives this is going to feel very honored and cherished!!!
2006-11-27 18:31:45 · answer #5 · answered by charis 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked it until the peanut butter part.
2006-11-27 18:35:14 · answer #6 · answered by prettyme 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cute until it gets to the your the PEANUT to my BUTTER bit
2006-11-27 18:29:16 · answer #7 · answered by He moonwalked on my <3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes..very nice...!
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2006-11-27 18:28:34 · answer #8 · answered by c g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it! You're good!
2006-11-27 18:30:29 · answer #9 · answered by zaytox0724 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-11-27 18:34:46 · answer #10 · answered by eaglestraces123 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋