I'll stick a number 2 pencil in your neck and wont pull it out till your shirt is dripping wet. 3rd trimester abortions with clothes hangers bent to the right proportions. whores preforming sexual chores on the floor of my 4 door Ford. Call me a preacher, i summoned the devil to the 5th row bleacher and started callingme teacher. All my 6 senses puts me on the offensives thats while I hang severed heads on white picked fences.
2006-11-27 17:31:06 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
YOU HAVE ASK THIS BEFORE.
2006-11-27 17:33:00 · answer #1 · answered by funnana 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think that definitely sounds creative and interesting to say the least, but unless your teacher is open minded about what poems she might get, she could have a problem with this one. I really hope not since she did say no rules.
2006-11-27 17:34:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would space it out and make it look less like a paragraph of text.
Make sure you put a space in between "calling" and "me" - it's a runon now.
I would change the tense of "offensives" to singular in the last line.
2006-11-27 17:34:30 · answer #3 · answered by Black Parade Billie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, it's very creative but it might get you called into the Principal's office, you know how paranoid schools are these days.
2006-11-27 17:34:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amen aaaaamen amen ammen amen amen that was awesome
2006-11-27 17:33:43 · answer #5 · answered by jesus c 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you're into twisted imagery, go for it.
2006-11-27 17:36:32 · answer #6 · answered by lookn2cjc 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Then I think you are good to go.
2006-11-27 17:33:16 · answer #7 · answered by Karla R 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no doubt she will give you an F
2006-11-27 17:35:01 · answer #8 · answered by spanky 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋