"Requiem Mass for the Living Dead"
Night has bloomed, with blossoms red/
Bleeding gloom inside my head/
Broken tombs and screaming dead/
torture looms,grows like your dread
I epitomize you/
I loathe and despise you/
I'll brutalize you/
and synthesize you/
Wake the dead, so we can sleep, while we're bled ,from eyes that weep/
lying lips prove talk is cheap, sew them shut so we can sleep in peace/
Requiescat in Pace, rest in peace
rest in peace ,you living dead/
dreams of murder filled your head/
as you wept from eyes that bled/
spread open on torture beds/
broken down,to be reborn/
pierce the flesh, scarred and torn/
is your face, a mask of scorn/
twisted as your crown of thorns/
Requiescat in Pace, rest in peace/
living death is Death denied/
Misery alone abides/
Tragedy's eternal tides/
Kill our thoughts, so we can rest in peace/
Requiescat in Pace, rest in peace, Requiescat in Pace, rest in peace. End
2006-11-27 11:10:53 · 10 answers · asked by enslavementality 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
I have a temporary copyright, should I shell out the cash for a full one?
2006-11-27 11:13:07 · update #1
Slippie, I've SEEN your poems, lol.
2006-11-27 12:19:18 · update #2
damn it`s fncking cool!
2006-11-27 11:15:38 · answer #1 · answered by Sir Alex 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds a little gothic!
2006-11-27 19:13:36 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I'm not a fan of poetry, but yours is good.
2006-11-27 19:16:54 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds a little angry & morbid but well written.
2006-11-27 19:13:55 · answer #4 · answered by Stiletto ♥ 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
we can live with it
2006-11-27 19:20:16 · answer #5 · answered by george p 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO. its well done but too dark for my liking
2006-11-27 19:21:14 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Is this really Marilyn Manson???
2006-11-27 19:13:59 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
dude your did you get that hell poem from?
2006-11-27 19:17:42 · answer #8 · answered by lokotz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is OK but it is kind of scary and depressing.
2006-11-27 19:16:38 · answer #9 · answered by Frank H 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
you psycho
2006-11-27 19:15:47 · answer #10 · answered by slippie 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋