This is a poem i have wrote for the troops god bless all of you.Tell me what you think of this poem
United we stand divided we fall
All for one and one for all
Alone in their bunks as they sleep at night
Pray to god above that they'll be alright
Proud and true for our country they stand
Not knowing what is in store for them,but our country is in their hands.
Many are fallen heros that didnt make it through
But died trying fighting for the red white and blue.
Letters are sent to families and friends saying they love them for this might be the end.
To the ones still fighting through blood and tears
Strong and mighty soldiers with so many fears.
With courage and bravery you get out there and fight.
While were thousand miles away sleeping at night.
I solute to you for all that has been done
In our hearts you are number one
2006-11-25 18:27:49 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Politics & Government ➔ Military
I love it. Can I copy it and post it in places around here (Afghanistan)?
Thank you so much.
2006-11-25 20:45:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-29 19:13:14 · answer #2 · answered by klosterman 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great but most soldiers dont want to be reminded of possible defeat or death. it is very patriotic though and I am sure others agree. Guess you wouldn't understand unless you were in the military.
2006-11-25 18:57:06 · answer #3 · answered by Mom_of_two 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you should print it up and mail it to every service man and woman you know. It's got heart.
2006-11-25 18:37:42 · answer #4 · answered by auntb93again 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Salim **** off
Sounds good to me! Any type of support for the troops over there from home would be well accepted and appreciated. Mail away!
Semper Fi!
Good Job!
2006-11-25 18:46:44 · answer #5 · answered by konstipashen 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the ending could have been a little better,
I solute to you for all that has been done
In our hearts you are number one,
the civillans can die for we don't care,
as along as they ain't ours they can die without a care.
thats a much better ending
2006-11-26 00:15:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
great poem...a few tweaks here and there but great over all
2006-11-25 18:36:45 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful. Although it doesn't make much sense to pray for someone to live so they can kill another.
2006-11-25 18:34:05 · answer #8 · answered by Salim Reilly 2 · 1⤊ 3⤋
i like it im in the army thanks.
2006-11-25 18:35:37 · answer #9 · answered by ya girl 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋