Its only fair to warn that i was born with a set of horns
and metaphores attached to my damned ambilical cords
world lord of swords, that will put you though your floor boards when i crash into your honda accord with my four door ford.
Im more to droppin an acapella than choppen a fella to mozzarella faster than a helicopter propeller. I laught at the sight of death as I fall down the brimstone steps into a bed of spider webs. I'm droppen a rusty scalpel into your scalp and pulling your adams apple out though your mouth.
2006-11-24 17:45:45 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Total garbage
2006-11-24 17:47:39 · answer #1 · answered by devora k 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
As someone who writes poetry I can understand why whoever wrote it thinks it is poetry and despite the poor spelling they are putting their thoughts down in a fashion that is not in a standard style for conversation. It is somewhat 'rap' in a bit of a way. It is not the highest (sic) quality of rap, that's for sure. It leaves a LOT to be desired for the poetry lover who appreciates beauty in poetry and wants to 'feel good' after reading poetry. Some people want to feel uplifted by a musical rythemic reading. This 'poem'? does not do that. It seems to be written by a very sad person who is frustrated by their experiences in life and by their limitations to do much about improving them. They need a GENUINE hug from someone who truly cares about them and their lot in life. They may feel no one gives a darn about them. That is how it looks to me. Maybe I'd say it is garbage poetry, but it says a lot about the author unless he(?) is trying to write it just to get a reaction from the 'establishment'. There are better ways to get attention than writing such stuff.
2006-11-25 01:58:22 · answer #2 · answered by Valerie D 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Garbage
2006-11-25 01:48:20 · answer #3 · answered by Gorgeoustxwoman2013 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's lame. It sounds like rap. Who rhymes mozzarella to propeller ?
George Bernard Shaw said, " the key to success to to offend as many people as possible.
2006-11-25 01:51:10 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
One man's trash is another man's treasure.
Who am I to judge? It kind of reminded me of a rap song, but I wouldn't know for sure as I don't listen to rap. It is interesting though.
2006-11-25 01:51:10 · answer #5 · answered by Lone 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Demonically twisted plus it made no sense straight babble. Pray child. God Bless! Love! Amen! ( Call out Jesus name it might help)
2006-11-25 02:10:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither. It sounds like someone is trying to act Gothic.
2006-11-25 06:26:05 · answer #7 · answered by Hardrock 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definitely poetry and I enjoyed reading it too. Nice! made me feel the angst
You have talent; keep writing
Remember: the rank and file rarely understand art even if it hits them in the head and makes an announcement
2006-11-25 01:48:01 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
>Garbage of the sort that would puke a dog off a gut wagon...probably very marketable given the current "tastes" in music(?) and poetry.<
2006-11-25 01:52:12 · answer #9 · answered by Druid 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Neither. Sounds more like a cry for help to me.
2006-11-25 01:47:47 · answer #10 · answered by Pamela 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋