Do you like Naruto fanfics? Do you have account with Fanfic.net?

Question

Hey everyone, I have a fic that I started writing and ask you to please read and review, especially if you have a Fanfic.net account. I am an aspiring writer and ask for your honest comments about it. Thank you.

Here's the summary:

“Promise me Naruto that there will be no feelings, no attachments or anything. That no one will get hurt and everything will go back to the way it use to be. That everything ends when he comes back.” A promise, a contract, a deal; whatever they wanted to call it was broken when they failed to comply with the terms and end their affair when he came back. [NarSak][SasSak][NarHin][NejiTen][InoShi]

Rated: M for mature audience

Here is the link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3251136/1/

THANK U and HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3251136/1/

Answer 1

I read it and sent you a review. So you have to read it to find out what I thought hehe.

Answer 2

I only watch the anime version of Naruto so I don't really know what happened in the manga. I thought Naruto regards Sazuke as his best friend so I find the story not very Naruto-ish.