Grammar check..help?

Question

grammar and structure..thx

I pass it finally. The activity is kind of difficult for me; but, through the activity, I knew that there are also many beautiful and fun places in Kaohsiung. I feel the activity is great. I leaned not only a lot of history stories, but also the origin of hometown. Furthermore, my ability in Spanish is polished. Hope there are a lot of activities like this one in the future; it make me know more about the unknown.

the activities....a lot of games I need to pass so that i can play next one..

I am not sure what name is sutible for the activity..

Answer 1

I finally did it. This activity is kind of difficult for me, but i learned through the activity that there are many beautiful and fun places in Kaohsiung. The activity is great. I learned not only a lot about history, but also about the origin of the hometown. Furthermore, my eloquence in Spanish has become better. I hope there are a lot of activities like this one in the future that will teach me more about what is unknown to me.

Are you Chinese? Me too! I'm learning Spanish too...

Answer 2

I passed it finally. The activity is kind of difficult for me, through the activity I know that there are also many beautiful and fun places in Kaohsiung. I feel that the activity is great. I learned not only a lot of history stories, but also the origin of hometown. Furthermore, my ability in Spanish is polished. Hope there are a lot of activities like this one in the future; it makes me know more about the unknown.

Answer 3

I passed it finally. While this was a difficult activity for me, I knew that there were many beautiful and fun places in Kaohsiung. This activity was great. I read a lot of historical stories, including the origin of the hometown. Furthermore, my ability in Spanish was polished. I hope there are a lot more activities like this one in the future. It allows me to learn more about the unknown.

Answer 4

as u have done the activity so u should use past tense.as:i passed that finally.though the activity was a bit difficult but i learned about many beautiful and fun places in Kaohsiung.i came to know about a lot of historical events as well as the origin of hometown.furthermore,it polished my abilities in Spanish language.i look forward for such more informative and interesting activities.

Answer 5

i am not sure about the activity you describe -- it is too vague to get meaning from. you traveled to someplace where they spoke spanish? you took a spanish class in china?

Answer 6

Agree with vanity planning