How should every girl be treated
As if without her you're not completed
And when her world is rocked with emotion
She should feel our unswaying devotion
And when she wants more and more
Still we'll hold that open door
And when her world is coming apart
She will know she still has our heart
I hope this get's the attention of the right girl so she will contact me too.
2006-11-22 07:19:15 · 4 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
Good luck
2006-11-22 07:20:23 · answer #1 · answered by sweetsum691 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that poem is great. You have talent. Good for attracting a nice girl who can appreciate a man with words. Not too many guys can express feelings so openly. Especially in writing (or words).
2006-11-22 15:23:23 · answer #2 · answered by giya_98 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If only guys could be like this all the time.... I know they try, but it just hasn't yet heppened for me... I like good job...and I'm sure you'll find the right girl someday.... :0
2006-11-22 18:07:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is excellent if she doesn't appreciate this then shes not worth it hopefully though she is fingers crossed!
2006-11-23 11:19:43 · answer #4 · answered by amy_aka_armygirl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋