~First Kiss~
Her deep brown eyes,
an angels gaze.
My beating heart,
a crashing wave.
Captured in time,
A breath away.
Nothing else existing,
longing to stay.
Lips so sweet,
A morning dew.
My heart embraced,
my soul subdued.
A touch so soft,
A velvet mist.
Under moons caress,
her tender kiss.
2006-11-22 00:47:09 · 7 answers · asked by sword of light 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
This poem hasn't been written for anyone....I just find it easy to remember what a first kiss really feels like
2006-11-22 01:15:16 · update #1
This poem hasn't been written for anyone.....I just found it easy to remember what a first kiss feels like.
2006-11-22 01:16:13 · update #2
Wow.
What a beautifully realized man you are.
I think that this poem is wonderful and the girl for whom it was written is very lucky.
Fory
2006-11-22 01:00:05 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its swell! Groovy! Fresh and zesty! MMMMmmmm! Help my next boyfriend write a poem for me!
2006-11-23 20:06:46 · answer #2 · answered by dreamer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes thats really nice it had just the right touch not to be sickening the person u wrote that for must be some1 really special
2006-11-22 09:00:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You must really be in love. Very nice. 5 star for you.
2006-11-22 08:58:44 · answer #4 · answered by manang bruka 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's very sweet!
2006-11-22 08:49:44 · answer #5 · answered by sassy2006 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes it is very beautiful !
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2006-11-22 08:49:41 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!.
BEAUTIFUL !!!!!!!!!!.
I WISH SOMEBODY HAD WRITTEN THAT FOR ME.
2006-11-22 08:51:16 · answer #7 · answered by ♪♥*B.B.K*♥♪ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋