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thank you so much

2006-11-20 17:51:05 · 4 answers · asked by cathydid 1 in Education & Reference Other - Education

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First disregard everything people have said up to this point. I hope you havent even read it yet. If you listen to me you will have no problems. If you go by the guidelines im posting then your paper should be brilliant.


Your argument essay should be writtin in this format:

Introduction-
Your introduction is the first paragraph in your essay. In an argument essay this will be that part where you explain the status quoa of your topic.. If your topic was was obeisity(the world wide epidemic of being over weight) then you would start of along the lines of saying how many people are overweight and how many people are estimated overweight in your country or in the world. Use some statistics or good information to get the reader engaged in the reading. Then explain why everyone is obeise, for example we have more fast food places and they are using more preservitaves. But your argument essay must be arguing something.... So... the last sentance in your introduction has to be your thesis. This will be your argument... In this case it could be "All fast food resteraunts should be required to adopt healthy foods" The next three paragraphs will be your body.
Body- All of the body paragraphs are in the same format. Your first line in each will be the other side of the argument. For example the first sentance can say "Many people say that its not the fast food companies fault for making people obeise its themselves". The next 5-8 lines can be your side saying that the average american adult has barely any free time in their life etc etc.
Do this for the next three paragraphs. Make sure your side is always stronger. After all the only point in an argument essay is to persuade the reader to think the way you do, and making you "win" their idea on the argument.

Conclusion-In the conclusion your first sentance can reflect back on the essay in a question. Your question could be in this case " Should fast food resteraunts add healthy foods?" Then give supporting evidence to support your side of the question. We could say "If Fast food resteraunts dont add more healthy options many humans including kids will die from obeisity and over weight related problems" etc etc. I hope you have read all of this and it was clear.

If you have any more questions email me. whatthefarick@yahoo.com

2006-11-21 16:09:20 · answer #1 · answered by johny b 1 · 0 0

If the essay is going to be in English, I would suggest you ask for suggestions on how you can improve your grammar.

2006-11-21 01:54:04 · answer #2 · answered by pakachuchu 2 · 0 0

How about debating the pros and cons of having laws? Or maybe, the pros and cons of homework? there are tons of possibilities. (but i personally think you might want to do the homework one!)

2006-11-21 01:53:55 · answer #3 · answered by Maggieee:] 3 · 0 0

why you should/should not write or speak proper english...
impact of the lack of morals in society today--gd or bad?
education--important or not?

there are many... please put on your thinking cap and you definitely can come up with some :)

2006-11-21 03:18:23 · answer #4 · answered by wat_more_can_i_say? 6 · 0 0

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