Spanish Speakers please help?

Question

ok i don' t need anyone to translate this but can u tell me if this is correnct and can u correct my mistakes, such as spelling, or incorrect word formation. Don't worry about accents and stuff i'll add that in. muchly appreciated

Mi familia y yo somos muy interesante. Soy simpatico, comico, artisco, creativo, generoso, responsable, y independiente. Tenog ***** pelo y cafe ojos. Tengo catorce anos pero soy bajo. Mi cumpleanos es veintiseis de Noviembre. Yo naci en Anaheim. Mi actitivas favoritas son tocar la guitarra y practican deportes. Me encanta escuchar la musica. Mi familia es grande, pero esta es muy simpatica. Tengo una madre, un padre y dos hermanos. Ellos son estaticos y muy comicos. Mi familia es muy carinosa. Mi familia le gusta ir en veleros e ir a la playa. Mi encanto mi familia.

Answer 1

Corrections:

1. Change "interesante" for "interesantes". "You and your family" is plural. So the adjective should be plural as well.

2. When the word following the joining conjunction starts with "i", the conjuction "e" is used instead of "y". For example: "responsable e independiente".

3. In Spanish, the comma is not used before the "y" or "e" conjunctions.

4. The adjective follows the noun. Examples: pelo ***** (not, "***** pelo") and "ojos café" (not, "café ojos")

5. "Years" is spelled "años", with the letter "ñ" (keyboard: alt+164).

6. Use a comma to separate "Tengo catorce años" and "pero soy bajo".

7. When referring to a person, "short" translates to "bajo de estatura", not just "bajo".

8. "Birthday" is spelled "cumpleaños", with the letter "ñ".

9. In Spanish, the names of months are not capitalized. It's "noviembre", not "Noviembre".

10. Say "Mi cumpleaños es EL veintiseis de noviembre".

11. Activities = "actividades".

12. practice = "practicar"

13. Say "Me encanta escuchar música", instead (don't add the article "la").

14. "Cómica" can be taken as derogatory. Use "chistosa" instead.

15. "Estáticos" means "static", that is, "motionless". I don't understand what was it you ment. (ecstatic?)

16. "Cariñosa" with the letter "ñ"

17. Say "A mi familia le gusta.."

18. Say "Me encanta mi familia."

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Answer 2

Cool, but it is "pelo *****" & "ojos cafe." Also, it is "catorce años." Without the wavy line over the 'n' you spell ******. To get the ñ, hold the 'alt' key down and strike '1-7-3' on your number pad.

Also, add "el" to "Mi cumpleaños es... el veintiseise de Noviember..." Watch that wavy line over the 'n' each time you type "año."

Very good.

H

Answer 3

My family and I am very interesting. I am simpatic, funny, artisc, creative, generous, responsible, and independent. Black Tenog hair and cafe eyes. I have fourteen anuses but I am low. My birthday is on 26 of November. I Born in Anaheim. My favorite activities are to touch the guitar and practice sports. It enchants to me to listen to the music. My family is big, but this is very simpatic. I have a mother, a father and two brothers. They are friendly and very funny. My family is very lovely. My family it likes to go in sailboats and to go to the beach. My enchantment my family.( I think you mean ,I love my Family)

Answer 4

ME ENCANTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA