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My Teen book series is about an Evil Scorcerer that does the usual Evil take over the world things, and Five people are chosen by the council of Elders and given Psychic powers to become the Hero witches to Defeat the Scorcerer.

I am thinking about Giving it the name "Cobweb Potion, The Scorcerer of the Dark Moon"

What do you think?

2006-11-19 17:01:56 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

"Cobweb Potion, and the Dark moon Scorcerer"? i like it :)

2006-11-19 17:08:33 · update #1

10 answers

I think it's alright.

2006-11-19 17:05:07 · answer #1 · answered by josie 2 · 0 0

Dark Moon Scorcerer

2006-11-19 17:49:47 · answer #2 · answered by John J 3 · 1 0

I agree with kc_chiefsfan. I like Dark Moon Sorcerer. "Cobweb Potion, The Scorcerer of the Dark Moon" is a bit too much for my tastes, if anything get rid of the "The" and use "Cobweb Potion: Dark Moon Sorcerer." By taking out "The" I think you could spark more interest in the book. :)

2006-11-19 17:11:15 · answer #3 · answered by NvadrApple ♫ 2 · 1 0

I think the title "Dark Moon Sorcerer" sounds better. It's more concise and would make a reader want to find out more by at least picking up the book to read what the story is about. The other one is too lengthy. Just my opinion...

2006-11-19 17:06:28 · answer #4 · answered by kc_chiefsfan 2 · 3 0

Seems a little complicated to me. Try something simpler like just Potion. Sequel titles can be lengthier.

2006-11-19 17:16:40 · answer #5 · answered by babydoll 7 · 0 0

How about just: Dark Moon ?

2006-11-19 17:11:21 · answer #6 · answered by r_e_a_l_miles 4 · 0 0

I like the tone, but are you spelling sorcerer with an extra C on purpose?

2006-11-19 17:13:07 · answer #7 · answered by purplepartygirrl 4 · 1 0

"Sorcerer of the Dark Moon".......

or.....

"The Potion, the Sorcerer, and the Dark Moon"......

or....

"Dark Moon".......


-Ginger

2006-11-19 17:22:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

whatever floats your boat! Nah I love it!

2006-11-19 17:09:54 · answer #9 · answered by I LOVE YOU! 5 · 0 0

too harry potter sounding

2006-11-19 17:08:52 · answer #10 · answered by choirchica55 2 · 1 0

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