Is this a good poem? Why??

Question

Dog Fleas and Christmas on the Side

Tail wiggles as lots of jinggle bells play,
waggles as smelly feet pass rotten rags;
Shiny nose stirs as crispy lights go scream,
expands, contracts as Mr. spits a nag.

Plastic covered seats, I love to lie on -
when found at midcreep, a blow to the fur,
sends my poor spirit away to the dawn -
where I lay outside the welcoming door.

Tail wiggles as young candles light the night,
waggles as cans open for a cold feast;
Shiny nose stirs to illustrate a fright,
wrinkles at a feline, an angry beast.

Time to retire and lie where the cold dwells,
not on soft, lovely plastic covered seats
but on a dreamy corner where walls meet
and tiny friends take on a big banquet.

Answer 1

well good and bad are different then like and don't like, but poetry is not easy to say, what one person likes another finds boring and trivial. That being said, I found it very juvenile, not horrible but it is obvious that words were chosen for there rhyme and not their meaning and for me that's an automatic turnoff. But I believe if you wrote something you felt, then it can't really be that bad, it's just very rough.

Answer 2

well... i didn't really like it but i have certain tastes in poetry and i'm picky. others might though. A+ on effort

Answer 3

not my style but will give you an a foe effort.