This girl likes shopping at the Georgia Mall.
When compared to me, she is really tall.
I would say that for sure she’s quite smart.
She also has an interest in art.
She likes to go to the beach and have fun,
laying out underneath the coastal sun!
Cookie Dough ice-cream is the best to her.
Say she is ugly then I must concur!
Dancing was her best in the early years,
But all she does now is tumble and cheer.
Her boyfriend is the star of the team, and
When they’re together their smiles beam!
[i couldnt get it to be in lines... so it's in a paragraph... it's an AABBCCDDEEFFGG... rhyme scheme.]
2006-11-19 13:38:15 · 7 answers · asked by heyhhc 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
It looks great. It all rhymes and it flows very well. You have done a nice job. The last paragraph -- move "and" to the second line to that beam and team rhyme. Your spelling and grammar are perfect.
2006-11-19 13:41:10 · answer #1 · answered by Sweet Susie 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Everythings correct-i read it two times just to make sure-i dont see anything wrong
I actually like this couplet you made is pretty good
I bet youre good at these
and anther reason i dont see anything wrong is because im getting a good grade in my english class
Hope i helped you
2006-11-19 13:44:17 · answer #2 · answered by shadow_the_echinda 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It works but in the last paragraph thingy you should put and on the next line.
2006-11-19 13:59:26 · answer #3 · answered by Sarah the Ballerina 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You followed the rules. Its good.
2006-11-19 13:40:46 · answer #4 · answered by Junia Z 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you got the rhyme as instructed...
2006-11-19 13:42:17 · answer #5 · answered by peanut butter 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds great
2006-11-19 13:52:36 · answer #6 · answered by Dieter 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't see any mistakes.
2006-11-19 13:50:41 · answer #7 · answered by ~Fairy_of_Joy~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋